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Glistening Love

 delicate dew drops
glisten on flower blossoms
love gleams near warm hearts

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David William Breidenthal

May 28, 2018 at 7:58 AM

Precious and tranquil poem...love is beauty of and in nature. -JWE

Charlie Smith

May 29, 2018 at 12:21 PM

Thank you JWE...

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2018 at 3:41 PM

A beautiful haiku, Charlie. I love the alliteration in the first line and the creative imagery throughout! I see congratulations are in order too. I'm sending a Soup Mail on another topic to you. Hugs, Carolyn

Charlie Smith

May 29, 2018 at 12:21 PM

Thank you Carolyn...

Lisa Ricci

March 26, 2018 at 7:25 AM

Good Morning Charlie - I hope this day finds you well. Contest or no contest this entry is beautiful with imagery and wonderful in its form and tone. Well done

Charlie Smith

March 26, 2018 at 12:11 PM

Thank you Lisa...

Sara Kendrick

March 13, 2018 at 12:11 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work.. Way to go..Congrats. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Charlie Smith

March 13, 2018 at 1:30 PM

Thank you Sara...

Probir Gupta

March 13, 2018 at 10:50 AM

Really nice haiku, Charlie ... Congratulations on your win ...

Charlie Smith

March 13, 2018 at 11:13 AM

Thank you Probir...

Curtis Moorman

March 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM

Charlie, I failed to enter this contest but regret my decision. The competition proved to be stiff. Your haiku is stupendous. I plan to venture out and try new forms. Hopefully, one day I'll be in the same class as you my friend.

Charlie Smith

March 9, 2018 at 12:21 PM

You are very kind Curtis but if I were you I would set your goals a little higher than the class I'm in. We've all got a lot to learn. Thank you so much...

Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2018 at 7:57 PM

Belated Congrats on this one. I don't think I even noticed the winners list

Charlie Smith

March 8, 2018 at 10:24 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Richard Lamoureux

January 22, 2018 at 6:45 PM

One of the best I have read. Congrats on your win.

Charlie Smith

January 22, 2018 at 9:55 PM

Thank you Richard...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 20, 2018 at 12:56 PM

Warm beautiful ink Charlie, congratulations on your win. xomo

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 11:50 PM

Thank you Maureen.

Sara Kendrick

January 20, 2018 at 11:53 AM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one. I love to take pictures of dew drops. Did you know that if you look closely at a dew drop you can see a miniature picture of its surroundings. Congrats on your winning work.Sara

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 12:53 PM

What a lovely comment Sara, thank you...

Line Gauthier

January 20, 2018 at 10:24 AM

Congrats, Charlie, on your fine win.

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:47 AM

Hardly a win but thank you Line.

Sandra Haight

January 20, 2018 at 8:47 AM

A very lovely, Haiku, Charlie. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:46 AM

Thank you Sandra.

Eve Roper

January 19, 2018 at 9:26 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:46 AM

Thanks Eve...

Gregory Richard Barden

January 19, 2018 at 7:09 PM

Gorgeous write and a very beautiful Haiku, Charlie ... you should be proud of this. Congrats on your win, my friend! :-)

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:45 AM

Thank you Gregory.

Andrea Dietrich

January 19, 2018 at 7:05 PM

Yep, I had seen nearly all the winners before the winner list came out. Love the warmth in this one, seeing it again. Congrats, Charlie.

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:45 AM

Thanks again Andrea.

Jan Allison

January 19, 2018 at 4:21 PM

absolutely beautiful and so charming - made me smile Charlie:-) :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Thank you Jan..

Connie Marcum Wong

January 19, 2018 at 2:50 PM

I love this haiku Charlie. I'm so happy to see it on the winners list! Congratulations! : )

Charlie Smith

January 20, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Thank you Connie.

Harry Horsman

January 17, 2018 at 7:13 AM

love this Charlie, different and unique

Charlie Smith

January 17, 2018 at 8:43 AM

Thank you Harry.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 17, 2018 at 12:37 AM

Love is a fragile thing, as fragile the flower in what I perceive to be a metaphor in this lovely haiku Charlie. Outstanding! : )

Charlie Smith

January 17, 2018 at 8:43 AM

Thank you Connie...

Susan Ashley

January 14, 2018 at 8:10 PM

Oh Charlie, how delicately and romantically beautiful your Haiku is. The lovely accent of alliteration of your first line sparkles and sets a scintillating tone for the rest of your lovely poem. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Charlie Smith

January 14, 2018 at 9:19 PM

Thank you Susan...

CayCay Godwin

January 13, 2018 at 9:50 AM

How dare they display ugly bunions beneath your beautiful Haiku! We should do something about that immediately! Very pretty, Charlie, and creative. All the best ... CayCay

Charlie Smith

January 13, 2018 at 1:18 PM

Thank you CayCay...