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Glint On Nile

Walking aimlessly Suddenly a star entered A poem happened What was the poem A cascade of golden light On her hair and neck How lovely you look Said golden neck,the light said, You are lovelier The bird in my vein Said to both of them, good morn They smiled, glint on Nile _______________________________________ 6/11/2016

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Date: 11/12/2016 1:57:00 PM
Just a wonderful poem, Probir. You are so creatively talented, I just marvel at your poems sometimes. This is a 7++ Excellent in every way. A beautiful piece of poetry. This is going into my fave for sure. Love and peace to you, my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/12/2016 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/7/2016 5:03:00 AM
Marvels of Haiku my friend, Probir! A seven for each!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/7/2016 6:29:00 AM
You are always appreciative ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/6/2016 2:19:00 AM
fascinating word choices, probir.. i like the sense of mystery, charm this piece possesses.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/6/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thank you ...

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