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Glint On Nile

Walking aimlessly
Suddenly a star entered 
A poem happened 

What was the poem
A cascade of golden light
On her hair and neck

How lovely you look
Said golden neck,the light said,
You are lovelier

The bird in my vein 
Said to both of them, good morn
They smiled, glint on Nile
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6/11/2016

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Date: 11/12/2016 1:57:00 PM
Just a wonderful poem, Probir. You are so creatively talented, I just marvel at your poems sometimes. This is a 7++ Excellent in every way. A beautiful piece of poetry. This is going into my fave for sure. Love and peace to you, my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/12/2016 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/7/2016 5:03:00 AM
Marvels of Haiku my friend, Probir! A seven for each!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/7/2016 6:29:00 AM
You are always appreciative ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/6/2016 2:19:00 AM
fascinating word choices, probir.. i like the sense of mystery, charm this piece possesses.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/6/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thank you ...

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