Glint On Nile

Walking aimlessly
Suddenly a star entered 
A poem happened 

What was the poem
A cascade of golden light
On her hair and neck

How lovely you look
Said golden neck,the light said,
You are lovelier

The bird in my vein 
Said to both of them, good morn
They smiled, glint on Nile
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6/11/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Just a wonderful poem, Probir. You are so creatively talented, I just marvel at your poems sometimes. This is a 7++ Excellent in every way. A beautiful piece of poetry. This is going into my fave for sure. Love and peace to you, my friend.
Gupta Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Thank you so much ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Marvels of Haiku my friend, Probir! A seven for each!
Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:29 AM
You are always appreciative ... Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 2:19 AM
fascinating word choices, probir.. i like the sense of mystery, charm this piece possesses.. huggs
Gupta Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 4:55 AM
Thank you ...
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