Seren Roberts Poet Kimo

Glint of Hope - Kimo Contest

Behind the lace veil lies a troubled heart ….
Will she please this tall stranger
Soon she will be his wife

Veil is lifted she raised her eyes to see him ….
Small glint of hope in his eyes
A small smile she returns



Penned 26 May 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire May 28, 2014 at 12:25 PM What a lovely Kimo, Seren. I wish you success in the contest. I am sending you a soup mail so I can email a copy of the birthday booklet to you. Love, Carolyn Seren Roberts May 28, 2014 at 1:29 PM Hi Carolyn, have sent u an e mail. looking forward to seeing your booklet. Thanks for stopping by .....Seren

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2014 at 12:10 AM this reminds me of a Muslim wedding or something. I really like it and the way they looked at each other in the end. Seren Roberts May 28, 2014 at 2:32 AM Yes Andrea had that in mind when I wrote it......thanks ...Seren

Tim Smith May 26, 2014 at 7:11 AM Beautiful Kimos Seren.... I think the bride to be is quite often not sure if she is marrying the right man...hugs Tim Seren Roberts May 28, 2014 at 2:33 AM Thanks Tim wasn't sure how to write a Kimo....Seren