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Glimpses of Summer

Down the majestic mountain, over the grassy knoll,
Themes verdant, chromatic, summer’s vistas scroll,
Rustling zeal of willows, as zephyrs-avid gently blow,
Propelling tides of vigor, where rivers burbling flow.

Cherishing blooming prairies, birds frolic and trill,
Gliding over scenic valleys, reveling flight of thrill,
Circling back to realm serene vying mirthful trees,
Warbling soft melodies amidst buzzing beats of bees.

Scattering gloomy shapes, clouds tenebrous reign,
Floating haze over horizon, shrouding vibrant terrain,
Unleashing with gusting winds feisty rain showers,
Swirling, whirling mid-air, delicate petals of flowers.

Storm cedes to calming breeze waltzing long shadows,
Quivering in twilight, scintillating face of meadows,
Luring glances of smiles where blossoms of lilies cajole,
Enthralling enamored eyes, as leisurely people stroll.

Inscribing motifs amethyst, as day’s journey slows,
Refracting sun’s golden rays, skyline-amber glows,
When passions of lovers, to blushing eve disclose,
Secret lyrics of passion, hearts romantic compose.

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2023

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Bill Baker Date: 10/1/2023 9:54:00 AM Your extraordinary talent of weave vibrant and eloquent words into imagery that sets the stage for a panorama of romantic feelings is amazing, Vijay. I can see why this poem got a 1st place award. Congratulations, my dear friend! Another FAV for my list! Have a pleasant week, Bill Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 9/23/2023 8:08:00 AM You have such a romantic heart Vijay and put those feelings so perfectly into captivating poetic words….Lovely! Debx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/21/2023 10:15:00 AM yes, summer has a little of everything, fortunately except for snow!! Good one, as always, Vijay Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/21/2023 6:22:00 AM Very descriptive of summer and the joy it can bring. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Ann Foster Date: 9/19/2023 11:02:00 AM "waltzing long shadows..." , I have seen this dance... I have... This whole pieces is beautiful. Well done. Ann Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/17/2023 6:20:00 AM you my friend have always had a way with words... romance and all its beauty always on display through your words, well crafted poetry... good to read you again! hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 9:00:00 AM Glad to see you again, Sandy. Much appreciate your kind thoughts my friend. Many thanks, Hugs to you as well.

The Situation Date: 9/17/2023 6:10:00 AM I was against word salads untill this piece where making it rhyme made it artful. then I wished I had a better vocabulary. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:58:00 AM I am humbled by your remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/16/2023 10:37:00 PM Aw, this is so descriptive Vijayji... your word choice and rhymes excellent.... "Unleashing with gusting winds, feisty rain showers"...I truly got a glimpse of the summers at your place. Here in India, we usually await eagerly for summer rains as we experience extreme humidity in summers... Loved the ending line. God bless... ~ Ani Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:58:00 AM Yes I remember the hot and humid days, Ani. Much appreciate your kind insights. Many thanks for stopping by.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/16/2023 1:02:00 PM Vijay, I enjoyed your breathtaking glimpses of summer, replete with beauty and charm. Congratulations on your win. :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:57:00 AM So glad to hear that Evelyn, given that your poems are always breathtaking, my friend. Much appreciate your visit. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/16/2023 10:27:00 AM While reading your words, the soft silhouette of summer beckons me, to embrace all of her beauty. You leave me in complete awe Vijay, with these savory images. Congratulations on your win. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:55:00 AM That is such a wonderful and poetic comment my dear friend. Much appreciate your visit and your cheerful presence on my page, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/16/2023 6:27:00 AM Wow wow wow, you never cease to surprise me with artistic writes painted with such spellbinding whimsical imageries, crafted so meticulously with ethereal rhymes and what not! Your poetry has it all, truly! You're one of my most favorite poets and it's definitely a pleasure to read your splendid writes always. The wordplay here is beyond mesmerizing and especially "Luring glances of smiles where blossoms of lilies cajole", "Quivering in twilight", "Warbling soft melodies amidst buzzing beats" :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:52:00 AM Your glowing remarks always add cheer to my day, Hiya. Much appreciate your presence on my page and goodwill of your heartfelt insights. Many thanks for the praise, that I must always strive to earn.

Charles Messina Date: 9/16/2023 6:05:00 AM Romantic and SO very well written, Vijay. You always paint a picture so beautiful with your pen. I just noticed that you won in a contest with this write...I wouldn't expect anything but a top win with this wonderful write. Congratulations, my friend. Hope all is well...Charlie Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:47:00 AM So glad to see you again my page, Charlie. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/16/2023 1:30:00 AM Your poem in perfect rhyme, astounded me with your choice of vocabulary. Congratulations for your win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:46:00 AM Much appreciate, Victor--many thanks.

Ink Empress Date: 9/16/2023 1:04:00 AM Where do i begin praising your work? I have no idea, i am in awe, and speechless, should i highlight how flawless and profound and magical your imagery here is? Or should i mention the rhymes that flow in such creative cadence? This is another fave for me, I truly enjoyed reading, i love the flow and depth of this and the way you’ve expressed here, especially “ secret lyrics of passion..” that last line and your use of gems colors etc is soulfully divine! You are so poetic. Impeccable write Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:46:00 AM It means a lot to read your kindest thoughts, Ink. Your vote of approval is much valued, especially given your poetic prowess. And so special to receive your FAVE, as well. Many thanks for your presence on Soup.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 9/15/2023 3:23:00 PM Many a landscape you just meticulously and skillfully paint with your poetic heart and you wonderfully compose the sweetest of music from Nature living beauties.. you have displayed an amazing setting just for lovers to rejoice! Great poetry! Congratulations, dear Vijay on your outshining win! Your wonderful poetry deserves all the honour! God bless you. Best regards. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:43:00 AM A delight, as always, to read your heartfelt remarks, my friend. Your thoughts and insights are much appreciated, Besma. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet Date: 9/15/2023 2:40:00 PM I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring. Your way of conveying wonderful imagery and weaving your romantic thoughts is utterly commendable. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:41:00 AM Thank you for sponsoring contests, my friend. Your comments are always so cheerful and uplifting, Lasaad. Many thanks for being there for so many on Soup.

Silent One Date: 9/15/2023 12:16:00 PM You are slowly becoming the king of romance.. those excellent rhymes which help you poem flow with imagery add to the excellence of this poem.. I think Sotto will love this one... Love this stanza: Cherishing blooming prairies, birds frolic and trill, Gliding over scenic valleys, reveling flight of thrill, Circling back to realm serene vying mirthful trees, Warbling soft melodies amidst buzzing beats of bees. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:40:00 AM Such a privilege to read your supportive comments, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, SO. Many thanks.

Jay Narain Date: 9/15/2023 11:14:00 AM Beautiful and articulate poem. Nice romantic nature poem. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:38:00 AM So nice to hear that, Jay. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/15/2023 6:22:00 AM Vijay, your vividly descriptive nature poem flows smoothly to romance. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:37:00 AM Glad you liked the descriptions, Janice. Many thanks, my friend for your visit and comments.

Tom Woody Date: 9/15/2023 6:02:00 AM Beautiful word vista Veej. Lovers strolling through a valley after a refreshing rain, holding hands, making future plans. You're good at these Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2023 8:36:00 AM Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Tom. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks.