Glimpse Behind the Curtain

At my age, I believe I live enough. 
Except life is what you make it;
a mixture of personal experience. 
I indulge in carnal pleasures 
to hit a climax of an euphoric ecstasy.
The kiss from whiskey-
It’s rough and harsh while burning my lips, 
yet it caresses my throat with a pleasant singe. 
Another morning of awkwardness 
with a wayward seductress. 
She came and went like a thief in the night, 
but we were entwined in erotic poetry;
a sultry confidante of my vulnerabilities.
Just another sip of fresh poison, 
and I delve into paradise.  
However, the intoxication remains the same 
as I mesh with other restless strays.
We’re all on cloud nine at this party! 
The lights, music and substances are plentiful
for the burdened and heavy-laden. 
There’s rest for both wicked and weary here-
Lay your demons down!
Maybe I’m in need of absolution… 
or I’ll continue to construct these thoughts as the room is spinning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/3/2015 1:54:00 AM
Inspiring write Ty, welcome to PS. You possess a wonderful pen
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Date: 12/29/2014 1:08:00 PM
keep writing as the room spins...very good!
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:52:00 AM
Hi Ty! Thank you for letting us have a quick fleeting look beyond your outer self. This poem is frank and expressive. A very fitting introductory write on Soup! Definitely merits a 7 rating. // paul
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Date: 12/20/2014 9:23:00 PM
I am shocked, it's a great poem. I felt like reading Edgar Alan Poe or Charles Baudelaire. Very powerful and emotional. This poem reminds me a song titled: Let Me Go, Devil! sang by Tex Ritter.
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:15:00 PM
TY T.,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:34:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ty - I choose your first sad, touching and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thanks for the glimpse behind the curtain of this tragic lifestyle(may not be tragic to others?) I like "lay down your demons" line. There is a better way for those who chose to take it. God sees all. Blessings to you this Christmas season. Darlene
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