Glimpse

I was a glimpse in the mirror today Of the girl I used to know That face so young and youthful But that girl, she decided to go Where did she run away to? Some land to be wild and free? If I let her keep traveling on this path, Well, what will become of me? I saw her face in my older reflection The sad smile that she's worn for years itching to come out just one more day As an alternative to silent tears Where did she run away to? And who did she think she could be? Who knew that this worldly freedom Would leave me so far from being free

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/15/2017 7:36:00 AM

I am truly glad to find this great poem this fine morn. You are that girl, talented ,intelligent and beautifully full of great promise. A gem and a fav......

Chuck Melugin

Date: 8/13/2017 6:34:00 AM

Dear Julie-Michelle The poet in that girl didn't run away! She is back and leads a poetic parade! That other girl will get jealous and come around also! 7 my best to you, chuck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2017 1:28:00 PM

marvelous poem filled with longing and unaswered questions.. you hold me in awe, juli... huggs

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/9/2017 10:36:00 AM

Oh girl! The struggle is real! I feel your pain and adore your poem

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/9/2017 9:50:00 AM

Wonderful introspective poem, Juli-Michelle. The greying of wisdom is always a timeless struggle for maturing youth. Fight the good fight to hold on to the best parts of you. Very perceptive and thought provoking poem. An instant fave. May love light your path always.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/9/2017 9:23:00 AM

We tend to think of ourselves as younger and when we look in a mirror...things just don't look right... Wonderful poem