Glimmer of Hope

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I noticed stab sites. My bereavement was shattered. Tidal surge of loss Tomorrow's gaping abyss Left a hope glimmer hanging

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/29/2021 12:49:00 AM

So true Lasaad... There is always a hope for tomorrow... Well penned Tanka... God bless.. ~ Ani

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/29/2021 4:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anitha, for your comment

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/28/2021 7:35:00 PM

Tomorrow has a way of healing the hurts of yesterday. Your imagery is quite beautiful. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/29/2021 4:14:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and generous comment, Evelyn, have a nice WE

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2021 5:11:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, You penned such a well-written Tanka. Good imagery and content, I found it a bit sad, but your final line changed the tide; it brought a ray of hope. Well done:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/28/2021 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis, your kind words are supportive and greatly appreciated, have a wonderful evening, blessings and hugs