Gleaming-El

In the fragrant noonday heat,
Sunshine poured on meadowsweet,
And rivers and lakes sparkled,
All while rose finches warbled,
From azure sky and green trees,
And sunshine burnished cities,
In the fragrant noonday heat.


Written on July 5, 2021
For: Elemental Poetry Contest
Sponsor: charles messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 7:49 AM
Hi Evelyn, I’m just coming back to congratulate you on a well deserved win. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you for the lovely sentiments. Enjoy your day as well, dear friend. :=) Evelyn
Messina Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Very nicely written, Evelyn. I truly enjoyed this...Congratulations on a fine win...Charlie
Buehler Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thank you for your kind words, and the honor of a win, Charlie. Your contest was delightful. Evelyn
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!
Buehler Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Thank you very much.
Zahid Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:14 PM
A great sweet write. Good luck for the contest
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:54 PM
Thank you so much. :D
Y. Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Hi Evelyn, This is a good entry for the contest. The contest is perfect for your amazing pen. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and confidence in me, Alexis. I hope your day is blessed, too. :) Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 10:30 PM
Short and sweet. Best for a win. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Very pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you and have a blessed day. :)
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:32 PM
This is enchanting, Evelyn, beauty at its best:)
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:35 PM
That's very kind, Jo. Thank you so much. :)
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Wonderfully written Haiku, Evelyn, full of great imagery and wonderful wording, all the best of the contest ( I think you need to put the picture number you choose under the poem Dear Evelyn). Blessings and kindest regards
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so much for your kind regards and well wishes, Lasaad. Blessings and hugs. Soup mail, please.
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