Gleaming Soul

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Dreading is pointless once a glorious light slithers our sight. Vanishing years of yearning, a pure heart laden with optimism. Gleaming soul with a bright angel at the crown of his right. Fading vivid hearts, As we clean tears in mysticism. Mumble concerns in the head as going off to slumber. The time for effort is passed; we'll not live in eternity. We will meet up with the truth of our ultimate cumber. Predicting a possible outcome of the eulogy. Faint tones of sorrow inspire the shapes on display. Uttered to hush once we are given an abode transition. Gold domes and flushes of magical bliss are to mollify. The cold rise of the soul is apace, natural, and not an illusion. Written: June 18, 2021 A Brian Strand July 10 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2021 2:48:00 AM

Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/19/2021 2:22:00 PM

A thought provoking verse Lasaad, I'm sure Joseph will love this one. A beautiful picture to accompany it too Best of luck Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/19/2021 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. Your lovely comment shed more allure on my poem, Have a safe and wonderful weekend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/19/2021 5:07:00 AM

Profound in thought, uplifting in mysticism, a poetic jewel, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Good luck. Blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/19/2021 1:28:00 PM

Your lovely comments reflect an amazing allure in my poem, and that is really much appreciated, dear friend Demetrios, Have a safe and gorgeous weekend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2021 12:56:00 AM

A lively poem, colorful and deep in thought. Best for a win.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM

Thanks, dear Victor, for reading and commenting

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/18/2021 7:19:00 PM

The rhymes are solid and your poem flows from the first to the last line, creating interesting images. I love your phrases, particularly "flushes of magical bliss" and "clean tears in mysticism."

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/18/2021 8:06:00 PM

It brings happiness to my heart to know that you found such pleasure in these lines, Milton. Thank you very much for your kind words inspiration. Have a wonderful evening,

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/18/2021 6:59:00 PM

I really like the colors of optimisim and, for me, the second stanza has the finishing polish to carry the message home. I think the last line is one of the most important in a poem, and your last line here is glorious!

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/18/2021 8:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle; your so kind words bring gladness to my heart. I'm happy that you liked and commented on my poem, have a wonderful evening Michelle.