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Glass Life

My glass life half empty, Never like you or them, Catalyzed by forsaken neglect, Abandoned with the breeze, Catapulted into your world of torment, Sparkling spirit lost its glimmer, Ebbing amidst flawed philosophies, Breathing cynicism into existence. Save me from this despondency, And soothe my demons, Requisitioning the essence of My everything, Pilfering what I'm meant to be. Shadows of doubt, Splintering my quintessence, Inundated by echoing relics of my past; Silence these fragmented reflections That plague me. Aching for the flicker of a New dawning, to Encompass every broken part of me.

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Date: 9/26/2023 2:01:00 PM
Raw and deep, and beautiful...
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Date: 9/23/2023 3:46:00 PM
A beautiful, powerful write incredibly well written. Very profound especially the last few lines. Many great poetic lines. You are a great poet. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Smiles to you :):)
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Date: 9/9/2023 11:40:00 AM
This is just mesmerizing, Fading Star:-) Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend. Keep writing!
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Date: 9/13/2023 6:59:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so kindly, Edward! I appreciate you! Thank you for the warm welcome! :)
Date: 9/7/2023 9:04:00 AM
Dear Fading Star, the beauty of your melancholy beckons my heart’s imagination to linger in the “fragmented reflections” of your reverie, awaiting with you, the hug and hope of a new dawn. A soulful gem. Welcome to poetry soup. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/9/2023 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback and thoughts! It’s truly an honor to receive your poetic words!
Date: 9/7/2023 5:43:00 AM
That new dawn is just around the corner. Welcome to PS
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/9/2023 9:59:00 AM
Yes it is! Thank you for your warm welcome!
Date: 9/6/2023 9:47:00 AM
I love this so much amore?your deep soulful words making me feel your depth into your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. Your grace,elegance of your majestic seraphic aura in a veil of melancholic nostalgia behind a hidden unease in unseen suffeting,my korean princess. You leave me breathless nurturing my soul in every lifetime. I will always be by your side taking care of you till my last breath.mia bellisdima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio??? i love you deeply micia
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Date: 9/9/2023 10:02:00 AM
Ahh, you are my beautiful poetic soul, my love..your words take my breath away and my heart and soul are one with yours! Ti amo amore mio, mio bellissimo martio per sempre..tua noi Infinito, il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione

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