Glass Learns the Weather

The first fulguration stooped to kiss a shard,
Not the thunderhead that boasted of its flame;
A broken bottle in an orchard yard
Held one white filament no night could claim.

The beech unlocked a thousand argent leaves;
Each fern leaned nearer, listening through the rain.
A kestrel loosed the wind from both its wings;
The granite seemed to soften in the plain.

Then lightning missed the heavens altogether.
It entered quartz, wet lichen, antler, thorn;
The river halted underneath its weather,
While moss recalled a coastline never born.

An oak drew brightness downward through its roots.
The fox stood still beneath a hawthorn's breath.
One acorn opened, showing not its fruit,
But rings of summers harvested from death.

When morning searched the hills, the sky was gone.
The birds flew lower, as though nothing changed.
Only the broken glass kept filling with the dawn—
Until the sun looked in, and turned away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Mohit! You have created a mystical realm, a place of poetic mystery where thunder shakes trees and acorns and lightning misses the heavens then is gone like a flash of energy. I am enchanted. Love your delicate rhyme scheme. There are so many layers to this poem, it bears reading and re-reading. A fav for me. Sending you blessings of light and energy.
MITRA Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:16 PM
Dear Sam, I have often wondered how adulthood grows fearful of imagination, and so quietly buries the child within. It gives me immense joy to know there are souls like yours who have kept that ethereal sight, and have turned its precious gaze upon my poor verses. Methinks this poem has earned its existence less by my writing than by your reading of it. With heartfelt gratitude, dear friend. In shared wonder, Mohit Mitra
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:10 PM
Well written my scribe. Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest.
MITRA Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 9:28 PM
Dear Alison, Your words found me at precisely the place where a poet is most vulnerable—after the poem has gone out into the world and no longer belongs entirely to its maker. To be met there with such generosity is a gift rarer than any placing. I shall remember your kindness far longer than the ribbon that occasioned it. May life return to you, in its own beautiful hour, the same quiet encouragement you have so freely given to others. Until the hidden music, Mohit Mitra
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