Glass Imaging

she flutters amidst heaven’s sky

to wink on boughs, a lullaby---

her glass-like wings adorn a night

imaging love's sway to delight

the fancy of kisses woven by queen firefly



Contest on Florette of Nette Onclaud
Franco Gonza 8 Sept 14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:18 AM
I never thought of this theme.. so well composed and original, franco.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!
Callus Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:31 AM
Lovely take on this theme, Franco...a captivating image of a firefly. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Fabulous write Franco! Congrats on awesome win!
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Congrats on a fine win, Franco
Sietesantos Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations, Franco on your wonderful win! Exquisite piece! Pandita
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Very beautiful poem Franco . Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:38 PM
lovely imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Murder Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:31 PM
a butterfly or lighteningbug perhaps? i would not keep her in a jar, for many others may enjoy her beauty! the poem is just as pretty! with regards, charlie
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