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Glass and Wine

Allow your thoughts to mix in with mine I can be the glass you can be the wine As you are swirled all the aromas show The complexity of you starts to grow Like all good wines I realize you need air Your magic emphasized others aware You intoxicate a wonderful gift A little bit of you gives hearts a lift As I am tipped your beauty does flow Not too quickly it's better to be slow Once you have been tasted others will see You are the words that flow out of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/16/2019 6:13:00 AM
Cin cin Richard. To be written before it's time.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Jeff.
Date: 6/4/2016 5:09:00 PM
I love finding time to sip on your words Richard, always a pleasure.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/4/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thank you sweet Casarah. I appreciate you reading one of my older ones. Hugs Rick.
Date: 1/21/2014 12:20:00 AM
Wow. Fantastic poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate you positive comment.
Date: 5/7/2013 6:37:00 AM
Fanatstic Analogy !! Really enjoyed this. Of course on the literal side-- being a wine lover myself xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2013 6:51:00 AM
Have you ever tried Okanagan wines from British Columbia? Mission Hill and Summerhill wines are both amazing. I live in Kelowna which is in the heart of wine country on lake Okanagan in the desert. Most people don't realize there's a hot spot in Canada.
Date: 5/6/2013 11:47:00 PM
A lot of wine and grape inspired writes lately! The whole poem was nice, but I really liked the third couplet. Like all good wines you need air... personal space is a must in any good relationship! Beautiful poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2013 6:52:00 AM
I think Freddis to blame with his Grapes of Wrath contest.
Date: 5/6/2013 6:24:00 PM
Tremendously original and imaginative. It's simple, beautiful, and a work of art. It'll be one of my favorites.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 6:59:00 PM
Aww thanks Carol.
Date: 5/6/2013 1:21:00 PM
This is beautiful beyond words
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/7/2013 12:17:00 AM
THIS ONE? OR THE ONE I HAD BEFORE? Oh, Richard...I was going to ask about the color! :( In the one before I'm wearing pink...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I like the new picture!
Date: 5/6/2013 12:44:00 PM
very Nice! capital N :) you may notice there is a typo next to last stanza "to" should read "too" have a great and love filled day, Cindy Cayton
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Cindy, I missed that one.
Date: 5/6/2013 10:18:00 AM
this makes me swoon... nice shot on mellowness of smooth lines, richard!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 12:57:00 PM
Higs back, thanks Nette.
Date: 5/6/2013 9:22:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful gem. Thanks for sharing, Richcrown~A.O
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 12:58:00 PM
Hi A.O, have a wonderful blessed day.
Date: 5/6/2013 8:45:00 AM
Great concept, my friend! A poetic masterpiece Monsieur Lamoureaux! Hope your day is a good one... cheers from the East!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 12:59:00 PM
Hi back from the eastern boy living in the west.

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