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Glaring

Your cutting glare bores
Into me like a pin in 
A voodoo doll. Prick.


7/5/11

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Kim Merryman

March 16, 2013 at 3:23 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Ralph Taylor

March 13, 2013 at 9:13 PM

Congrats, Sue. Well done. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

Debra Squyres

March 11, 2013 at 12:35 PM

Nice senryu !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

March 9, 2013 at 7:25 PM

Hola Susan, girly girl.... this one trully poked a pin in me.. ha ha... LOL , I got one word for you.... "CONGRATULATIONS!" ;-)...PD

Jack Horne

July 19, 2011 at 11:33 AM

Many congrats on your win, Susan : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 19, 2011 at 8:27 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.d., Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 19, 2011 at 4:52 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 19, 2011 at 4:40 AM

Congrats Susan on your wonderful win with this terrific piece of poetry... luv the theme luv.. sorry for late congrats but the system was no cooperating for comments late last night... always luv..

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2011 at 9:39 PM

oh, i LOVE that last word and how I can attach the other meaning to it!!

Constance La France

July 12, 2011 at 7:18 AM

I hate when people glare, I want to just glare back until they look away, ha, two can play that game!, so I loved this senyru, well done and thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, I appreciate that so much~~

Melissa Acevedo

July 12, 2011 at 6:52 AM

lol

Juanita Warden

July 11, 2011 at 12:40 PM

very nicely stated and true.

James Foulk

July 11, 2011 at 11:45 AM

few words sometimes says a lot, as this well written Senryu did.

Sara Kendrick

July 11, 2011 at 11:06 AM

Interesting work..I wonder who this could be?..Enjoyed reading ...Your presence at my work was uplifting...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Jack Horne

July 11, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Yes, I can visualise this one, Susan - hope this is just a poem and not factual, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 11, 2011 at 9:45 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Susan. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Neva Flores

July 11, 2011 at 9:25 AM

glares will do this....fabulous write

John Freeman

July 11, 2011 at 9:18 AM

Ouch! Right on to the point literally. Smile. Cool Susan. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball

July 11, 2011 at 7:33 AM

OOhoohoo! I've had people give me looks like that. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jl Sadberry

July 11, 2011 at 7:20 AM

Smile, *^_^* “Intense Emotions Expressed Brilliantly Amid But A Few Words My Dear Precious Susan Burch = I Am Not Very Hip to The Trip of Voodoo Dolls *^_^* I Can Only Imagine == The Swinging of The Hearts Pendulum Perhaps Found Somewhere Within This Excellent Verse, My Dear.” === My Love Always, Jasper *

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