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Glaring

Your cutting glare bores
Into me like a pin in 
A voodoo doll. Prick.


7/5/11

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2013 3:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/13/2013 9:13:00 PM

Congrats, Sue. Well done. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

Nice senryu !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2013 7:25:00 PM

Hola Susan, girly girl.... this one trully poked a pin in me.. ha ha... LOL , I got one word for you.... "CONGRATULATIONS!" ;-)...PD

Jack Horne

Date: 7/19/2011 11:33:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Susan : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 8:27:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.d., Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 4:40:00 AM

Congrats Susan on your wonderful win with this terrific piece of poetry... luv the theme luv.. sorry for late congrats but the system was no cooperating for comments late last night... always luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2011 9:39:00 PM

oh, i LOVE that last word and how I can attach the other meaning to it!!

Constance La France

Date: 7/12/2011 7:18:00 AM

I hate when people glare, I want to just glare back until they look away, ha, two can play that game!, so I loved this senyru, well done and thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, I appreciate that so much~~

Melissa Acevedo

Date: 7/12/2011 6:52:00 AM

lol

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/11/2011 12:40:00 PM

very nicely stated and true.

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 11:45:00 AM

few words sometimes says a lot, as this well written Senryu did.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2011 11:06:00 AM

Interesting work..I wonder who this could be?..Enjoyed reading ...Your presence at my work was uplifting...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/11/2011 10:07:00 AM

Yes, I can visualise this one, Susan - hope this is just a poem and not factual, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Susan. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Neva Flores

Date: 7/11/2011 9:25:00 AM

glares will do this....fabulous write

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2011 9:18:00 AM

Ouch! Right on to the point literally. Smile. Cool Susan. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball

Date: 7/11/2011 7:33:00 AM

OOhoohoo! I've had people give me looks like that. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/11/2011 7:20:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* “Intense Emotions Expressed Brilliantly Amid But A Few Words My Dear Precious Susan Burch = I Am Not Very Hip to The Trip of Voodoo Dolls *^_^* I Can Only Imagine == The Swinging of The Hearts Pendulum Perhaps Found Somewhere Within This Excellent Verse, My Dear.” === My Love Always, Jasper *

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