Gladden

February greatly welcomed
Blooms, green, warmth was its greeting
January not accustomed
Left in flurry winter cheating
Gladden Daffodils bloomed treating

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Jack Horne

Date: 2/27/2012 12:29:00 PM

Beautiful write, Sara. I just love those daffodils

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/25/2012 6:12:00 PM

Yes, may winter leave us early this year...it looks like it's trying! I'm sure you would like to see Spring as soon as possible, right? I know I would love to see Spring right now! What will it look like outside on the first day of Spring I wonder! I live up north so it takes awhile for Miss Spring to show her beautiful face! But who knows about this year! This write tells all about this very effectively, with the Daffodils blooming all about during our warm winter! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 6:04:00 PM

great cinquain for spring, Sara!! Nice seeing you today.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 2/25/2012 3:38:00 PM

I really like this Sara well done!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/25/2012 12:41:00 PM

Very nice imagery Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/25/2012 12:18:00 PM

a poetic treat for short form, sara.. always a joy to read you.. huggs and stay healthy! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 2/25/2012 12:06:00 PM

Lovely piece, Sara. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2012 10:14:00 AM

We were warm for a little while, but it got cold again after a day of rain. Nicely written cinquain about a warm February which is still winter.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2012 9:51:00 AM

an engaging work of art Sara.. we have so,e blooms right now but Spring should see may luv.. did u get hit with lots of snow? Georgia was mentioned like Colorado for bad weather luv.. stay warm and safe..