John Lawless Poet Pleiades

Glaciers - Pleiades G

Glaciers

Gargantuan ice walls
Glassily reflecting 
Glistening, churning seas
Grasping the edge of frost
Gripping softened sea beds
Growling in disbelief
Grimly accepting fate.


12/2/2016


submitted to – Pleiades G – Poetry Contest

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Agnes Krampe February 9, 2017 at 9:46 PM Coming back with congrats!

Laura Leiser February 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM Very descriptive pleades, John! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2017 at 7:43 PM Love glaciers! Congrats, John!

Kim Merryman February 9, 2017 at 6:03 PM John, so glad to see your name at the top of the winner's list. Creative topic, beautiful imagery and excellent flow. Congrats on your 2nd place win. Blessings, Kim

Jan Allison December 4, 2016 at 10:38 AM Very vivid and descriptive John:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx John Lawless December 6, 2016 at 10:12 PM Thanks Jan

Laura Leiser December 3, 2016 at 11:03 PM Excellent and aptly descriptive Pleiades on glaciers, John! GL in the contest :( John Lawless December 6, 2016 at 10:11 PM Thanks Laura

Agnes Krampe December 3, 2016 at 9:46 AM Nice pleiades, John - I love how the consonants are working to mimic the grinding motion of the ice. John Lawless December 3, 2016 at 2:40 PM Thanks Agnes, nature has a language all its own.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2016 at 4:09 AM - Beautiful poem, John - Luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :) John Lawless December 3, 2016 at 2:39 PM Thanks Anne-lise