Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Glacial Heaven

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A glacial heaven on blue earth

     Swaddled in blankets of crowned snow,

           Suckling breast of my ancient birth

In mountain streams, bamboo trails flow.


When life’s finished, here I will lie,

            To hear my ancestors’ lullaby.

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Maru Bulaklak October 30, 2011 at 5:13 AM Such a very wonderful write...

Carol Sunshine Brown October 3, 2011 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage October 2, 2011 at 1:28 AM Nette, you have such a great knack for writing such beautiful poems. My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee

Charlotte Puddifoot October 1, 2011 at 7:56 PM congrats nette on a joint 1st place! original take on the photo, beautiful verse :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta October 1, 2011 at 12:29 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, nette

Bob Quigley October 1, 2011 at 11:02 AM A well deserved first place nette. Congratulations

John Freeman October 1, 2011 at 9:20 AM Awesome, Nette, Awesome lullaby, in the glacial heaven where souls never die. Goodbye earth of turmoils and strife. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 1, 2011 at 12:16 AM Congrats Nette luv .. on first place win with super lovely lines luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 25, 2011 at 12:06 AM ultra unique portrait of the photo in words so beautiful Nette luv.. John Moses will simply quake at this one it is so lovely ..good luck my friend..

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2011 at 12:11 AM this is wonderful verse for the contest, Nette. How are you doing these days?

Elizabeth Wesley September 23, 2011 at 9:58 PM Like a lovely dream. Floats so softly.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2011 at 6:18 PM Happy weekend enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Nette. Love, Carol

Tony Lane September 23, 2011 at 8:17 AM Beautiful. Tony

Kash Poet September 23, 2011 at 7:11 AM Ohh Nette a heavenly write from you.(.was out of town...back now).This is going to top the chart I think...

Gautami Phookan September 23, 2011 at 3:36 AM Hello nette, visiting PS after a long- long time...howz everyone here, how are you dear? and here, kept on re- reading the lines..magical, beautiful!! Outstanding brilliance in your work always!!!! Love you, gautami.

Russell Sivey September 23, 2011 at 12:01 AM Oh nette, that is an outstanding write! I really enjoyed reading it...plus I really enjoyed the twist you put onto this poem! Your interpretation is quite unique and wonderful!! Great work!!

Nancy Jones September 22, 2011 at 11:31 PM yes indeedy.. one to sleep on for years... thanks, netteski~N