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Giving Up On Poetry

I can’t seem to find the right key To write this poetry Love is good and hate is bad Which one should I choose One liner or two liner How do you choose Rim Rhyme or chime To many choices to choose 10 Syllables and Punctuation What is it and where do they go I don’t know This poetry is to confusing to me Words I spell look good to me But it always seems to have The wrong meaning for me Poetry or Me which one do I choose Inspired by: One of Chris Poems

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/22/2018 10:24:00 PM

Resonates with me, my friend, and with many others as well, I suspect. Well-penned. Season's best! ~ Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 12/21/2018 3:31:00 PM

..."DON'T FIGHT IT!! WRITE IT!!!" Used that as a workshop title and had some great fun with some poets.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/21/2018 8:38:00 AM

Hi Bobby, Chris inspired you to write a good poem. The technical things about poetry can cause a major headache. Why do you write? I enjoy your poetry and you giving up is not an option. Just saying. I enjoyed the read BF:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/21/2018 9:13:00 AM

Chris is an amazing poet.Lately you have become an inspiration to me as well. Thanks:-) Alexis

Bobby May
Date: 12/21/2018 8:58:00 AM

Chris wrote one a while back about giving up poetry and it was a joke but it inspired me to keep going, I am not going to give up yet you now have inspired me to keep going on so you and Chis have inspired me.

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/21/2018 7:28:00 AM

Poetry is a difficult task master; she pushes you to spill the beans and when its done it looks like a mess. Wait, now I'm confused ~ is this supposed to be helpful? Anyway, keep writing and have a joyful season.

Bobby May
Date: 12/21/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Phil very much and for the visit, have a great holiday and stay safe!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/21/2018 6:36:00 AM

Wishing you a Merry Christmas full of love, peace and health. Also, thank you for always commenting on my poems. Love xo

Bobby May
Date: 12/21/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thank You Pixie! Love ya back my friend!