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Giving It All

You put your all into him, he puts his all into you... But we somehow still have more to give. She's giving it her all, but he's starting to give less, but she holds on, keeping them both afloat... He starts giving his all again, but something feels off, she's feeling uneasy, she's giving less... She dies a little inside as the tears stream down her cheeks. She wants to tell him, but she knows he needs to sleep. She knows he's dealing with too much already. But she made a promise... And so did he!

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Date: 4/19/2017 9:38:00 AM
Nice well written always keep a promise
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