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Giving In Can Be Wrong

The pain is real enough Throughout we must be tough Life deals with us this way For some is all play, play, play! For us it's find a way To achieve a better day The rolling hills of life Down and up; two different sides! Stress and strain purely to survive Fragile minds - nowhere to hide Together with hope and strength we find a way To live our life a better way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/3/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/3/2016 5:05:00 PM
Nice words..
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A Yorkshire Poet
Date: 2/3/2016 5:13:00 PM
Hi Keith, thanks very much. Cheers.
Date: 2/3/2016 4:24:00 PM
Nice ending message, T I R O JY, the pain is real. Great free verse. LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 4:27:00 PM
Hi Linda, thanks very much. Cheers.

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