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Giving In

what a repulsive sight. a loved one giving into the whims of every beck and call. give him a break. its so well deserved. the shouts, anger, and frustration just won't seem to stop. i plead for justice. let it be heard. nothing seems fair. but the shouts are echoing in my mind. long after the storm stoped. i still see the lightning flash as it moves away. things seem so much more clear at a distance. i tell him why the picture is wrong. but he still shows no resistance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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