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Giving In

Just put me on hold while I do this, Turn me off, I’ll be back when I’m done, My reactions are no longer mine, And if I pass Don’t worry, Just think thoughts sublime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/23/2009 10:03:00 AM
Message received. Emotion's strong. Nice beat. Good poem! ~Jen~
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Date: 1/23/2009 6:27:00 AM
Steve - I loved the clear message delivered in this short format - God Bless, MJ
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