Giving In

Just put me on hold while I do this,
Turn me off, 
I’ll be back when I’m done,
My reactions are no longer mine,
And if I pass 
Don’t worry,
Just think thoughts sublime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 23, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Message received. Emotion's strong. Nice beat. Good poem! ~Jen~
Jordan Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Steve - I loved the clear message delivered in this short format - God Bless, MJ
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