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Excrement and urine Tears and spit Wax and vomit Snot and sweat Hair and nails Rust and breath Words and verses Seeds and milk

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Date: 2/11/2013 5:52:00 PM
Hm..very interesting work indeed. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:52:00 PM
I am not sure if this is what our children give us or our parents as they age. Either way, I like your perspective.
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Date: 2/2/2013 3:15:00 PM
An interesting perspective... from 'the other side'... Terry (good poem)
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Date: 2/2/2013 12:17:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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