Giving Back

Excrement and urine
Tears and spit
Wax and vomit
Snot and sweat
Hair and nails
Rust and breath
Words and verses
Seeds and milk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Hm..very interesting work indeed. Always, Laura
Grisetti Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:52 PM
I am not sure if this is what our children give us or our parents as they age. Either way, I like your perspective.
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February 2, 2013 at 3:15 PM
An interesting perspective... from 'the other side'... Terry (good poem)
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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