Giving Advice

It’s tricky when you give advice
Without somebody asking,
For even if your words are heard,
The truth takes some unmasking.

It’s easy overstepping bounds
To offer an opinion
But often, you just trespass
On what isn’t your dominion.

It’s hard to know what someone thinks
For feelings might stay hidden
And honesty, though touted,
In the real world seems forbidden.

So you should tread most carefully
When offering advice,
‘Cause tipping apple carts sure isn’t
Worth the sacrifice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/1/2015 8:26:00 PM
Well let me tell you this. Your point I didn't miss. But when I tell the ecru walls just what I really think. Some how they seem to understand that that is why I drink. :) It's only rhyming, I only sip. :)
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:12:00 PM
Words of wisdom you share with us, Ilene. Many times I am tempted to offer advice, but often I bite my tongue and hold back. Unsolicited advice is not always welcome. #7 // paul
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Date: 3/26/2015 7:51:00 AM
Your word choices and colorful charm make this a very interesting and enjoyable read. Emile.
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:14:00 PM
wise words indeed Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/25/2015 6:43:00 PM
Advice to heed. Thank you
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Date: 3/25/2015 6:18:00 PM
This is awesome! So unbelievably true and well crafted!
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