Giving Advice

But maybe you should…..
I feel myself close down.
I despise advice.
I give her some suggestions.
Hope to annoy her
I can be a hypocrite
But not every day surely
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 9:36 PM
Next time, don't even start. You can do it, my friend! ~ Hippo Critter Call
Krutsinger Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 9:51 AM
I will do better now
Hankins Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Oh, Caren, I can't imagine your being a hypocrite, of all things. A hypocrite, in my book, is one who does not practice what they preach. I do not think of you in those terms!
Krutsinger Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Maybe I'm not but I do sling advice when it gets slung to me and never at other times.
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