Giver of Life

Surrounded by trees,
The river flows peacefully;
Bringing life to all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Nice haiku and great imagery. Tyler
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February 12, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Beautiful use of this short form. Such serenity here. Nice job! Karen
Gass Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Oh Raul, this is absolutely beautiful. The images are wonderful. Love, Robin
Vasquez Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Manificient job Raul....And thanks for the comment.
Bingham Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:07 PM
My home is near the Frio River, and it is the main source of income for many around these parts, we live in a beautiful area here in the Texas Hill Country, Loved this write, Blessings, Ron
Neal Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 2:55 PM
What a giver it is. I love to sit by a river and think. DN
Winter Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 6:49 AM
A peaceful, meaningful, sweetly flowing haiku. Sigh. Beautiful. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:26 AM
The beauty of this Raul..so peaceful..I want to be there..good work.
Neal Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Nice title, I love the simplicity of your work, it's soothing in itself. Love E.
Ginn Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:40 AM
Nice job Raul, just calm and sweet and peaceful. Laurie
P. Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 1:14 AM
you bring this form with such passion.. life!! ~ Arany
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Water of life indeed.Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Edmonds Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 9:33 PM
Nice thoughts of a peaceful scene. I know what river you speak of........the Chief
Lopez Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 9:12 PM
a very soothing poem raul.......good j.o.b. .........the mayor
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