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Giver of Life

Surrounded by trees, The river flows peacefully; Bringing life to all.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 2/14/2009 7:00:00 PM

Nice haiku and great imagery. Tyler

Date: 2/12/2009 2:01:00 PM

Beautiful use of this short form. Such serenity here. Nice job! Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/11/2009 8:42:00 PM

Oh Raul, this is absolutely beautiful. The images are wonderful. Love, Robin

Christina Vasquez

Date: 2/11/2009 8:22:00 PM

Manificient job Raul....And thanks for the comment.

Ronald Bingham

Date: 2/11/2009 7:07:00 PM

My home is near the Frio River, and it is the main source of income for many around these parts, we live in a beautiful area here in the Texas Hill Country, Loved this write, Blessings, Ron

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 2:55:00 PM

What a giver it is. I love to sit by a river and think. DN

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/11/2009 6:49:00 AM

A peaceful, meaningful, sweetly flowing haiku. Sigh. Beautiful. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/11/2009 4:26:00 AM

The beauty of this Raul..so peaceful..I want to be there..good work.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 4:07:00 AM

Nice title, I love the simplicity of your work, it's soothing in itself. Love E.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/11/2009 3:40:00 AM

Nice job Raul, just calm and sweet and peaceful. Laurie

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 1:14:00 AM

you bring this form with such passion.. life!! ~ Arany

Brian Strand

Date: 2/11/2009 12:22:00 AM

Water of life indeed.Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2009 9:33:00 PM

Nice thoughts of a peaceful scene. I know what river you speak of........the Chief

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/10/2009 9:12:00 PM

a very soothing poem raul.......good j.o.b. .........the mayor