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Given Up

Do this Do that Take this Take that Avoid this Try that Come here Go there Don’t do this Don’t do that Giving up Throwing my hands in the air Drained Tired of it all Exhausted Partially burnt out All out of energy and drive Reduced to following directions So different from barking them Now just trying to keep up Barely keeping it together AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on February 10, 2019

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Date: 2/11/2019 11:50:00 AM
"given up" sounds like a background line to a country western song...that could be depressing
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Date: 2/11/2019 12:05:00 PM
LOL for all the country western fans out there.
Date: 2/10/2019 9:54:00 PM
Unsure how to read this one---which helps make it a great poem! :) One thing for sure, though: The feeling comes across loud and clear! ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/10/2019 11:04:00 PM
LOL Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Gershon.
Date: 2/10/2019 8:27:00 PM
I have felt this way many times my sweet friend, well written keep your chin up and never look down if you do you may trip, lol
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Date: 2/10/2019 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Bobby.
Date: 2/10/2019 7:36:00 PM
You get across that feeling very well, Line.
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Date: 2/10/2019 7:38:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

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