- Give You My Thoughts -

Cheek to cheek, skin to skin
                                          A pleasure under the skin
                                               Tingling and warm
                                          Freeing thoughts and minds
                                          Reason and comprehensive
                                           Relationship and meaning
                                             Wholeness and artwork
                                               Endless possibilities
                                          Only those who can change
                                                    can continue




06.04.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Mcconnell Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 8:52 AM
really great write Anne,nice enjoy to read. well done. Hows Norway this day, Scotland dull & dreary. Have blessed day, Gordon
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May 19, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Gordon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
The Heavy Hearted Poet Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 8:04 PM
This is so very true... we must be able to change... That is my problem...I am always changing so it is hard for me to continue in my present. Thank you for your meaningful words...
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:13 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Valerie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Really insightful work. You are very wise and I appreciate reading your inspirational work. Have a lovely week. Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 2:32 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De Burca Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Hi, a beautifully written piece, multi-layered and sensual. Thanks for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:01 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seosamh. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mendoza Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 12:18 PM
Thank you because believe it or not I found my soul mate and he's a priest. I thought he was my Spiritual Director so I'm writing him letters. All through our journey, I found out his defect and I can heal it. I'm just sad that our lives on earth seem to be long before we get to the next you know... Do you have the copy of poetic forms because I need it. Thank you for this poem because I thought some of mine are too simple or light.
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Jacqueline, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hicks Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Very nice work... Especially the last two lines. I find it hard to break routine but it's really the only way you can grow and mature...
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:09 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Timothy, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Enthralling!
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Demetrios, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Almurisi Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:18 AM
very nice poem ( Only those who can change can continue) true expression I hope you the best go on regards Naji
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:22 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Naji, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Your poem illustrates the creative change which occur when one strives for meaning in relationships. Good writing, Anne-Lise, and thank you for commenting on my poems. Greetings, David
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:15 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you David, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:12 AM
This is a very lovely verse my dear friend Anne Lise giving me an awesome feeling while reading it. I truly enjoyed this brilliant and creative write of yours this evening. Thank you so much for sharing and your nice comments on my latest write. Great Wall is indeed a beautiful place to visit. Again, thank you so much and have a blessed and grace-filled day! love lots, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:06 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Leonora, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Phillips Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:32 AM
Hi Anne Lise, this is a beautiful work of art that is filled with different imagery,and is open to different forms of interpretation. I like the line "Pleasure under the skin" ...it could be interpreted as paint brush on canvas creating a work of art or the literal pleasure originating from human nature... It can even be interpreted beyond that meaning
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:35 AM
Yes, you're right Christine :) - - Enjoyable with a visit from you, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Hello, Anne Lise. This is nice. The last part is very profound.
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:07 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Andrea, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bordner Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Very sage art Anne - adaptability is paramount in successful survival - 'Hand to Back...' J.A.B. %
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:07 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Justin, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Evolve or stay behind. And I condone skin to skin. Just sayin'. Great job! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 10:09 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Drake, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Curry Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:10 AM
your poems are very stirring. thanks for a good read and your comments on mine. randy
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Randy, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ougo Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 2:56 AM
i'm sooo in love with it...deep write..thank you Anne and have a nice week :-)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:12 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Word, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Anne, so deep.......love it happy weekend. Terry xoxo a 7 >>>> well deserved.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Terry, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Anne; I love your poem. You have given us beautiful thoughts. Thanks and God bless you....... Lucilla
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Lucilla, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Excellently done this extra ordinary poem where revolutionary thought is concerned.Thanks..................,loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you bl, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Anne, so deep.......love it happy weekend. Terry xoxo a 7 >>>> well deserved.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:24 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Terry, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Komala Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:41 AM
ahh so lovely... you have such a beautiful poetic Soul :) enjoyed so much your talented writes..as always <3 luv and hugs far off....wishing you a great weekend dear sista Anne Lise <3 Sk
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:43 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:19 AM
Anne-Lise profound and beautiful...David
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:22 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Minardi Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:02 AM
heilloooo Anne Lise.. this is a great thought. i enjoyed the read and ur comments always uplifting :) have a wondeful weekend. oh where is Arild? i checked on his page.. no new poem :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:05 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Dinda! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Interesting work that you have penned and placed here for us to read..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 2:21 AM
Beautifully-made poem! Well crafted!! I got a piece of your thoughts. Thankx for your kind, encouraging comments on my poetry! xDD The beginning to the end were amazing. Have a good week! ~~~~~~~~~~DWB
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:08 AM
Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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