Give Up

I felt hard
When you set the rules
Used to tie my hands
But I’m not a fool.

You love restrictions
I’m not a clone
This relationship chokes me
Just leave me alone.

Spent many nights
Wasted my tears
You controlled me
I’m getting more fears.

So don’t blame me
If I will give up
You give me no freedom
Your love is messed up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 22, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Nice write Lei...keep it up!...Peter.
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