Give Up

Though I don't want to give up There is no point in fighting Though I want to keep going Is it really worth the battle There is nothing for me here And never will there be I am just a waste of air Another body to step over Shall I really say goodbye Or is this just my beginning I am so confused right now Lord just take me away

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/31/2009 1:49:00 AM

Jessica, Your writing is getting better and fast! Good job at expressing your feelings. Let the Lord take you away to a quiet place where you can think. Sometimes troubles bring us closer to God. That is a positive thing. Hang in there. This will pass and you will look back on it and will have learned something that is very valuable to you as a person. Don't give up. God Bless you. Lovingly, Dane