Give Up

Though I don't want to give up
There is no point in fighting
Though I want to keep going
Is it really worth the battle

There is nothing for me here
And never will there be
I am just a waste of air
Another body to step over

Shall I really say goodbye
Or is this just my beginning
I am so confused right now
Lord just take me away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 31, 2009 at 1:49 AM
Jessica, Your writing is getting better and fast! Good job at expressing your feelings. Let the Lord take you away to a quiet place where you can think. Sometimes troubles bring us closer to God. That is a positive thing. Hang in there. This will pass and you will look back on it and will have learned something that is very valuable to you as a person. Don't give up. God Bless you. Lovingly, Dane
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