Sarah Jabri Poet Monorhyme

Give Me Your Mark

You showed me no mercy for my troubled soul
You crushed my dreams and took my innocent goal
You kissed me goodnight but you ran and stole,
My morning smile and left me with no role

To think it was you who held me too tight
The one person who taught me how to fight
And was it not you who showed me the light?
The one who promised me the love tonight.

If this is what I get for loving you so dearly
Then forgive me but I'll be coming for you severely
And I shall not show no pride and no mercy
For the wound you brought will show you the pain sincerely

I take not vengeance but me showing you my bark
For killing my only heart and taking its mark
Yet my kindness still resides upon my arc
So before I start, I shall ask you to give me your mark.

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Gordon Mcconnell March 25, 2012 at 2:52 PM Great write, Sarah. so refreshing yet quite interesting on how the story takes us through the ups and downs of love. Bless you, Gordon

Lester Lagdamen March 23, 2012 at 8:54 PM Well done bhie :) I'm so proud that you are getting lots of feed back from other readers. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 22, 2012 at 6:16 AM Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Sarah. Love,Carol

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2012 at 2:32 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon.Taking vengeance will not fix anything even though it is something that we as humans have a tendency to want to do..Sara Sarah Jabri March 12, 2012 at 2:35 PM it is true, vengeance wont do us any good yet we seek after it...thank you for reading this :)..God bless.

Charles Jefferson March 12, 2012 at 12:25 PM Its alwas amazing to see how much of a point can be made even with the barrier of rhyming. Great poem. =) Sarah Jabri March 12, 2012 at 2:40 PM Thank you Charles :) Charles Jefferson March 12, 2012 at 12:26 PM *always*

M.I.A . March 11, 2012 at 9:00 PM an excellent write! rhyme has never been my strong point thus i always enjoy and admire those who do it well. great poem and welcome to the soup

Robert A. Dufresne March 11, 2012 at 8:24 PM very interesting monorhymes miss Sarah. Hard to do and keep to the theme but you've done a lovely job of it.

Kash Poet March 11, 2012 at 5:55 PM Sarah I love this poem Sarah Jabri March 11, 2012 at 5:58 PM Thank you very much :) I'm glad you love it.

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2012 at 5:39 PM Hello. Sarah. Are you fairly new here? I enjoyed your poem. Let me go see one more. Sarah Jabri March 11, 2012 at 5:40 PM Yes I am new here, I just started 4th of March.. Thank you very much for liking it :)