Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Bite Size No 88 Contest by Line Gauthier- 6/18/24

Give Me Wings

Fill my heart with love's light
before darkness leads it astray.
Quill me lines of romantic Sonnets
meant to chase glowering clouds away.
Offer me wings so that I might take flight.

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Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2024 at 6:20 AM I own a Peter Nixon painting that looks a like this one. A lovely write! Congrats, Lin! Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:30 AM Isn't it lovely? I'll have to check out Peter Nixon. You appreciate good art...;-)

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2024 at 11:49 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Delighted to see you name on the winners' list. Sara K Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:29 AM Thank you very much, Sara.

JC Brul August 23, 2024 at 5:16 AM Oh, so lovely! Congratulations Lin Lane. Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Jcb.

Daniel Henry Rodgers August 19, 2024 at 6:00 AM Dear Lin, what a wonderful romantic poem to read this morning with such great words. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:29 AM Thanks, a sweet bunch, Daniel.

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 19, 2024 at 1:56 AM Very nice and romantic short poem! Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:29 AM Thanks, AA. It had to be short for the contest

Jan Allison August 18, 2024 at 10:47 AM Beautiful and romantic Lin. I have the song 'on the wings of love' floating in my head:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane August 27, 2024 at 6:28 AM I always find a picture after I've written my poem. This one was perfect. I'm hearing that song, too. Thanks.