Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- Give Me the Eternity -

The longing for a deep red ruby
          creeps like an ivy in my heart
          Love me today - love me tomorrow
          Sparks sensors from a sensitive heart
          Give me the eternity
          Like a lost child you take my hand
          Heart demons in angels inner circle
          brought me into beautiful golden moonlight
          Take me with you ... in perfection ... the divinity
          Hot bodies close together
          The silence encourager ... weak breath
          A deep red ruby is perfect - a beauty
          The eternity - how long is that





07.12.2013
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C. Thomas Iv December 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM AY YAAAAAA Anne Lise this is a ruby red piece itself lol. Beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2013 at 7:52 AM :))) C. Thomas Iv December 26, 2013 at 6:55 AM Oh, this is FJ Thomas (Flo); needed an adult acct for poems I am not ready for my daughter to see just yet ;)

Wendy Meyer December 22, 2013 at 4:17 AM It seems with this one, eternity is something or someone near yet so far. It's like a dream, yet certainly a possibility anytime or beyond mortality. May you find it my friend, and cherish it. Love, Wendy Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2013 at 6:22 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Wendy - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Taylor Woodall December 20, 2013 at 7:47 PM Beautiful. I love this it makes me want love and is so cute<3 Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2013 at 6:57 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Taylor - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vesna Kovrlija December 12, 2013 at 8:45 AM Beautiful and touching poem! Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2013 at 10:33 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Vesna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin December 12, 2013 at 6:40 AM 7 stars Anne-Lise You are Poetry!! One off topic question, Where's Becca Lucas? Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2013 at 7:45 AM ... I do not know where Becca are........... - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak December 11, 2013 at 7:38 AM Romantic and beautiful. Your words are perfection. Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2013 at 10:22 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich December 10, 2013 at 2:58 PM very romantic. and I love the ending question: how long is that. If you ever stop to consider eternity, it is mind blowing!! Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2013 at 3:44 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter December 10, 2013 at 2:21 PM Very steamy, Anne!...and kind of dreamy, too...Well done! Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2013 at 3:44 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Caleb. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick December 9, 2013 at 2:13 PM Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2013 at 2:24 PM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones December 8, 2013 at 8:06 PM Anne Lise this is such a sweet poem...the take me with you..in perfection....what a dreamy line! Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2013 at 2:40 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 8, 2013 at 4:23 PM Enjoyed reading this heartfelt work of yours. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2013 at 2:40 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, A.O. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cinzia Guerci December 8, 2013 at 1:02 PM Pure passion Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 1:04 PM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Cinzia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 8, 2013 at 11:25 AM wonderful write Anne...thank you for stopping by....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 11:59 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips December 8, 2013 at 8:40 AM A lovely poem depicting the heart of a lovely Anne Lise. Continue to shower your readers with love. Love is a very powerful too that can reach beyond the imaginary line and bring peace to the heart mind body and soul. Nice love verse. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:46 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Christine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun December 8, 2013 at 8:39 AM A very beautiful and romantic poem well crafted by your very creative words my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm so glad & my honor to read again tonight one of your stellar writes. Thank you so much! Have a grace-filled weekend to you and your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:45 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed December 8, 2013 at 7:30 AM Lovely work of art Anne Lise. Loved the energy I felt in your poem. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:25 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Mustapha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid December 8, 2013 at 7:18 AM very beautiful picture painted Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:25 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta December 8, 2013 at 4:50 AM Lovely romantic write on longing and love, Anne Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:24 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose December 8, 2013 at 1:50 AM You've made my Sunday brilliant. Thanks for sharing. JM Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:24 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden December 8, 2013 at 12:49 AM Your descriptions woven are always so enchanting sweet Anne - Lise... Something within compels me to believe that eternity will come for us all. Such a tender piece from your shinning heart. Sincere hugs XOXOX Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:23 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam December 8, 2013 at 12:41 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. Great poetry. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:23 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Ravi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi December 7, 2013 at 5:55 PM You must have read all the hot ones! ;) Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:22 AM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson December 7, 2013 at 4:57 PM great poetry Anne-Lise xox Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2013 at 4:58 PM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Julie Heckman December 7, 2013 at 2:53 PM what a gorgerous, striking, lovelypoem Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2013 at 3:18 PM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Julie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 7, 2013 at 2:37 PM my goodness, anne.. such eternal bliss within your heart and lines.. beautiful!.. blessed be this coming sunday!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2013 at 2:40 PM - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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