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Give Me Some Sunshine

Death
seeping
through the walls
dark dampened mind,
Sunlight ceased to enter here long ago
thoughts sinking deeper and deeper in ground
like marshy land,
depression
winner
now.



© kashinath karmakar ( 14 th June 2011)
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Placement :6th (January 2012)

Contest:In the Mood any Poem

Sponsor:PD(Irma Linda)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2011 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "In The Mood" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2011 12:29:00 AM

Kash, a big congrats to you here, but even BIGGER win in MY contest! YAY for you tonight.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 3:16:00 PM

Sad expressions here..Congrats on your win..Sara

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/6/2011 9:26:00 PM

congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/6/2011 12:37:00 PM

Kash congratulations.. How are you doing? :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2011 12:27:00 PM

i love your take on this one, kashi... cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/6/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win my poet friend...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2011 5:26:00 AM

Congrats Kash on your HM ..for excellent poetry my friend.. enjoy honor..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2011 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations Kashinath for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2011 11:13:00 PM

I hope this is the poem you meant me to check. I have to get off here right now!! This looks right to me,Kash. SOrry I can't comment to anybody's poems until tomorrow. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 6:35:00 PM

oh how poignant Kash.. a wonderful presentation and subject matter luv.. good luck in the contest.. u aced this one with form and write ..oh..wow..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 6:02:00 PM

Kash, a very deep image... the shadow,, will swift away... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/16/2011 12:39:00 PM

I love this powerful emotive write, Kash

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/16/2011 12:53:00 AM

What one could give for sunshine indeed, I think you portrayed depression here quite well, seemingly sinking deeper and deeper, just being stuck... I think I will be back here to congratulate you on this winner (& nope not depression being the winner...)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2011 9:09:00 PM

I think you did really great with this form. Did I see another one posted as well? So what made you do depression? My hubbie's cousin has deprssion much worse than he does At age 60 last week she killed herself. I had never met her. Just always heard about her. I heard that depression is going to become the second most common disease in teh world!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2011 5:59:00 PM

Nice take on the theme of the movie, kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2011 11:50:00 AM

We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Kashinath. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/15/2011 9:24:00 AM

Kash, I love this title of yours and your entry for the contest.. good luck to you ;)

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/15/2011 1:28:00 AM

A dark, deep write. Anyone who has ever suffered from depression knows exactly what you are saying! Wonderfully expressed. Regards, Robert.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2011 12:45:00 AM

brooding, wrenching, amazing, kashi! winning wishes to you! visit my latest blog and see why:) huggs!