Kash Poet Poet Tetractys

Give Me Some Sunshine

Death
seeping
through the walls
dark dampened mind,
Sunlight ceased to enter here long ago
thoughts sinking deeper and deeper in ground
like marshy land,
depression
winner
now.



© kashinath karmakar ( 14 th June 2011)
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Placement :6th (January 2012)

Contest:In the Mood any Poem

Sponsor:PD(Irma Linda)

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 22, 2011 at 5:58 AM Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "In The Mood" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2011 at 12:29 AM Kash, a big congrats to you here, but even BIGGER win in MY contest! YAY for you tonight.

Sara Kendrick July 8, 2011 at 3:16 PM Sad expressions here..Congrats on your win..Sara

Juanita Warden July 6, 2011 at 9:26 PM congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Wilma Neels July 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM Kash congratulations.. How are you doing? :)

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2011 at 12:27 PM i love your take on this one, kashi... cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Michael J. Falotico July 6, 2011 at 5:33 AM Congrats on your win my poet friend...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 5:26 AM Congrats Kash on your HM ..for excellent poetry my friend.. enjoy honor..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 4:21 AM Congratulations Kashinath for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2011 at 11:13 PM I hope this is the poem you meant me to check. I have to get off here right now!! This looks right to me,Kash. SOrry I can't comment to anybody's poems until tomorrow. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 16, 2011 at 6:35 PM oh how poignant Kash.. a wonderful presentation and subject matter luv.. good luck in the contest.. u aced this one with form and write ..oh..wow..

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM Kash, a very deep image... the shadow,, will swift away... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne June 16, 2011 at 12:39 PM I love this powerful emotive write, Kash

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 16, 2011 at 12:53 AM What one could give for sunshine indeed, I think you portrayed depression here quite well, seemingly sinking deeper and deeper, just being stuck... I think I will be back here to congratulate you on this winner (& nope not depression being the winner...)

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2011 at 9:09 PM I think you did really great with this form. Did I see another one posted as well? So what made you do depression? My hubbie's cousin has deprssion much worse than he does At age 60 last week she killed herself. I had never met her. Just always heard about her. I heard that depression is going to become the second most common disease in teh world!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2011 at 5:59 PM Nice take on the theme of the movie, kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2011 at 11:50 AM We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Kashinath. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels June 15, 2011 at 9:24 AM Kash, I love this title of yours and your entry for the contest.. good luck to you ;)

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 15, 2011 at 1:28 AM A dark, deep write. Anyone who has ever suffered from depression knows exactly what you are saying! Wonderfully expressed. Regards, Robert.

Nette Onclaud June 15, 2011 at 12:45 AM brooding, wrenching, amazing, kashi! winning wishes to you! visit my latest blog and see why:) huggs!

Francine Roberts June 14, 2011 at 11:44 PM wonderful entry for Chris's contest, great job

Kash Poet June 14, 2011 at 11:41 PM Inspired by a song sequence from famous Indian movie"Three Idiots".One of the best movies I have ever watched.