Sand Blown Poet Free verse

Give Me One Minute

i'm on the poetry site dear
don't concern yourself with what i say...
when you're young it's go go go
see what the world is about
but when you're oldt it's stop and listen
see what the world is about as it goes by


stan sand

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Mpho Kgaswane July 27, 2019 at 4:53 PM Very interesting point of view. Captures well our attitude and differences amongst generations. Regards Mpho Kgaswane. Sand Blown July 27, 2019 at 4:58 PM yes...it is a bit of a shock at first when it hits 'home' ...there's kind of a quiet 'increase' in awareness : )

Jeanne Mcgee July 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM Nicely penned, Stan. typo on old? Sand Blown July 27, 2019 at 4:54 PM thanks for the comment...oldt?...hey, i do lots of things on purpose

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 27, 2019 at 8:20 AM Nice!!! Sand Blown July 27, 2019 at 8:38 AM thanks...you are a darling starling