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Give Me One Minute

i'm on the poetry site dear don't concern yourself with what i say... when you're young it's go go go see what the world is about but when you're oldt it's stop and listen see what the world is about as it goes by stan sand

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Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 7/27/2019 4:53:00 PM

Very interesting point of view. Captures well our attitude and differences amongst generations. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.

Sand Blown
Date: 7/27/2019 4:58:00 PM

yes...it is a bit of a shock at first when it hits 'home' ...there's kind of a quiet 'increase' in awareness : )

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/27/2019 3:19:00 PM

Nicely penned, Stan. typo on old?

Sand Blown
Date: 7/27/2019 4:54:00 PM

thanks for the comment...oldt?...hey, i do lots of things on purpose

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/27/2019 8:20:00 AM

Nice!!!

Sand Blown
Date: 7/27/2019 8:38:00 AM

thanks...you are a darling starling