Running Wolves Poet Free verse

Give Me Not

Give me not
just heart or soul
what I want
is something sweeter
lingering beyond physical needs
where intangible ties
run deeper
what I seek
Is what I offer
commitment
so complete....

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Mystic Rose Rose January 16, 2020 at 11:36 AM Without commitment nothing is possible for very long. In this world of transient beings, we need a steady shoulder to lean on. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem dear poet. Have a great day. Running Wolves January 16, 2020 at 12:10 PM thank you very kindly...

Ingrid Lehman January 15, 2020 at 5:42 PM Nicely written! Sometimes difficult to find a deep 'heart and soul' love with commitment. Hugs Running Wolves January 15, 2020 at 8:39 PM Thank you very much

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2020 at 7:53 PM I love this one, a simple message so beautifully expressed. Running Wolves January 9, 2020 at 8:35 PM Thank yee very kindly...

Jean Bush January 3, 2020 at 10:33 PM Sweet but despairing that it has to be asked for. Nicely done. May your New Year be as brilliant as your last. Running Wolves January 9, 2020 at 8:34 PM Thank you dear lady

Caren Krutsinger January 1, 2020 at 5:13 PM Commitment is what so many are looking for, and yet, they know it not. Running Wolves January 1, 2020 at 6:32 PM True, but to most commitment is as fleeting as the wind... Thank yee for stopping by...

Darlene De Beaulieu January 1, 2020 at 2:20 PM Hello Running Wolves, I wish you the best of luck in the New Year. Have a nice day my fiend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 2, 2020 at 2:11 PM Hello Running Wolves, yes friend.That a boy! have a nice day my friend. Running Wolves January 1, 2020 at 6:33 PM Thank you kindly, fiend?? Me?? Naaah, okay I don't care what my ex said...Bwahahahaha

Sandra Adams December 31, 2019 at 11:44 PM nicely penned when the soul and heart are truly involved commitment comes easy... may 2020 bring you much happiness and blessings my friend... Happy New Years... hugs Running Wolves January 1, 2020 at 6:38 PM Thank you kindly dear Lady hugs back :-)