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Give Me Not

Give me not just heart or soul what I want is something sweeter lingering beyond physical needs where intangible ties run deeper what I seek Is what I offer commitment so complete....

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Date: 1/16/2020 11:36:00 AM
Without commitment nothing is possible for very long. In this world of transient beings, we need a steady shoulder to lean on. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem dear poet. Have a great day.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/16/2020 12:10:00 PM
thank you very kindly...
Date: 1/15/2020 5:42:00 PM
Nicely written! Sometimes difficult to find a deep 'heart and soul' love with commitment. Hugs
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/15/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/9/2020 7:53:00 PM
I love this one, a simple message so beautifully expressed.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/9/2020 8:35:00 PM
Thank yee very kindly...
Date: 1/3/2020 10:33:00 PM
Sweet but despairing that it has to be asked for. Nicely done. May your New Year be as brilliant as your last.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/9/2020 8:34:00 PM
Thank you dear lady
Date: 1/1/2020 5:13:00 PM
Commitment is what so many are looking for, and yet, they know it not.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/1/2020 6:32:00 PM
True, but to most commitment is as fleeting as the wind... Thank yee for stopping by...
Date: 1/1/2020 2:20:00 PM
Hello Running Wolves, I wish you the best of luck in the New Year. Have a nice day my fiend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/2/2020 2:11:00 PM
Hello Running Wolves, yes friend.That a boy! have a nice day my friend.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/1/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly, fiend?? Me?? Naaah, okay I don't care what my ex said...Bwahahahaha
Date: 12/31/2019 11:44:00 PM
nicely penned when the soul and heart are truly involved commitment comes easy... may 2020 bring you much happiness and blessings my friend... Happy New Years... hugs
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/1/2020 6:38:00 PM
Thank you kindly dear Lady hugs back :-)

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