Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Give Me More of You

Give me more of you
give me all like a flower
my butterfly mind
fluttering for you honey
so unfurl all the petals.




© kashinath karmakar (21st June 2011)
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Johnny Sumler June 30, 2011 at 1:32 PM Love the imagery in this exquisite Tanka. "give me all like a flower...my butterfly mind". I love your poetic creativity!

Wilma Neels June 25, 2011 at 1:05 PM Love the romance Kash, enjoyed this Tanka of yours :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 23, 2011 at 8:09 AM most romantic invitation I ever read Kash.. lovely words.. good luck in the contest .. wonderful imagery and so vibrant too..luv it luv..

Kacey Greenlee June 22, 2011 at 8:23 AM Great description.Very well written love.Thanks again for your comment on my win!!Have a wonderful poetic day....

Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2011 at 3:55 AM So romantic, Kash. Love the image of the worhiped flower unfurling her petals for you! Great write, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud June 21, 2011 at 10:49 PM oooh, sensual in a subtle waym kahsi.. beautifully done! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2011 at 10:29 PM this is WONDERFUL, Kash. So little and cute just like a fluttering butterly!! More like this!!

Sara Kendrick June 21, 2011 at 5:14 PM Excellent metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed the subtle message ..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by ...Sara