Give Me Love

I know it’s not smart 
to be in love with me.
But please, oh please,
don’t leave me be.
Stay for just 
one second more.
I want to be the one
that you adore.
The absence of your
laugh from my life,
makes me feel 
empty inside.
Give me your love,
if just for tonight.
I promise to give 
you all my affection
in return for your
heartbeat and protection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Grushco Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Call out, emotional, yet young and insecure. Well, we r all feeling like this sometimes. U put ot on the paper. Like ur rhyme ))
Davey Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 5:17 AM
You may think you need them there to feel safe and comfort but it is just covering up the discomfort and creates more harm in the end.
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Very heartfelt and a longing to be loved. I like the hint of rhyme in your free verse. Tim
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