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Give Me Hope

i wander if you can see me I wander if you can hear me I wander if you can see my struggles I wander if you can feel my sorrow Hold me tight i am about to break into pieces Show me light Tap my shoulder Touch my heart Even i feel doubt Even i am losing hope Please let me see a glimpse of light

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Date: 12/11/2024 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/25/2017 6:47:00 AM
messages of heart ... we all like ... Nice ...
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Date: 4/25/2017 1:41:00 AM
I hope you'll like it
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