Give Me Hope

i wander if you can see me
I wander if you can hear me
I wander if you can see my struggles
I wander if you can feel my sorrow
Hold me tight i am about to break into pieces
Show me light
Tap my shoulder
Touch my heart
Even i feel doubt
Even i am losing hope
Please let me see a glimpse of light
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Agustin Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:41 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gupta Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:47 AM
messages of heart ... we all like ... Nice ...
Baraguir Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 1:41 AM
I hope you'll like it
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