Give Me Another Chance

You no longer call me.
When I call you, you say that
you have a train to catch;
at three in the morning.
You give me many excuses
not to talk to me.
This is killing me inside,
like an old tree with a cylindrical
hole inside it.

I know I did you wrong,
finding me with another girl;
my ex. We just kissed,
we didn't have sex.

I'm no longer a player any more.
The house is silent without you;
The bed is cold without you;
I long for your pancakes;
No more movies;
No more moonlight gazing;
No more you....

Please, darling,
come back home;
come back to me.

Sorry for every hurt I caused you;
sorry for everything....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/2/2016 1:45:00 AM
Wow I love this take on second chance x Ist for me x congrats x
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/2/2016 3:49:00 AM
Thanks so much for enjoying my piece, Wendy!! *^_^*
Date: 8/31/2016 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations, Teddy. A girl should return to poetry like this. If not, she's missing someone great. Although, Why did you kiss? LOL
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/1/2016 8:56:00 AM
Temptations, lolest. Thank you so much Janis, for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Date: 8/31/2016 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations Teddy on the placement of the contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/1/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nayda!! *^_^*
Date: 8/26/2016 5:17:00 PM
Teddy, I hope she forgives you but being a woman, she will never forget! Life is life, don't apologize. Sad write my friend.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2016 2:28:00 AM
Hehehe. I pray it never comes to this..... Thanks for your comment, Daniel :-)
Date: 8/26/2016 9:26:00 AM
teddy, an emotive write well expressed..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2016 2:26:00 AM
Thanks for passing by, to read and enjoy my piece, Nette!! *^_^*
Date: 8/26/2016 6:51:00 AM
Well shown ... Emotionally rich ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2016 2:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Probir!! :-)
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