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Echoes and vacancies Where you used to be, Is a reality, I refuse to face. Instead give me your face, Look into my eyes, Allow me to touch your nose With mine and Simply, not ever let you go. I want to inhale you And exhale me and Become one over and Over and over again, Fully clothed, Naked souls and Until mathematics beholds The theory of two being Synonymous with one. Give it to me. Give me your past and Your fears and your last And your tears So I can hold it up to the light, Examine it and reignite That part of you That sings good night With a smile on your face, Just because you know Your place Is absolutely beside me. Give me all of you. We deserve it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/6/2013 9:52:00 AM
Hello Doreen, ... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 1/1/2013 1:17:00 PM
Doreen , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing your pen..pd
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:14:00 AM
Nice expression of hope for love. Enjoyed the reading. Pl. read my write "TOW HEARTS". Loved always, bl
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Doreen Wright
Date: 8/18/2012 9:37:00 PM
Thank you bl. I will check yours out.
Date: 8/17/2012 11:32:00 AM
OMG..I fell in love with the flow of this poem..I read it over and over again aloud....excellent!!
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Doreen Wright
Date: 8/17/2012 8:51:00 PM
LOL!! Thank you Ink...read it some more...ALOUD!
Date: 8/17/2012 1:14:00 AM
Doreen now I just love this ballad like confession, I hope you get your dream...David
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Doreen Wright
Date: 8/17/2012 8:51:00 PM
Thank you so much David...I hope so too :-) I appreciate your comment and well wishes.

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