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Three words to do magic, touch the stars Three words to undo a lifetime of hate And anger, these all will be quenched Thirsty yet, for those three words? The triple threat, those beautiful ones are Said with none of the regret Do it all over, not a chance you bet Then trust me to stop and say Just the three Most precious and sought after words, Just those unbelievably powerful visceral like Vocabulary vocal treasures, vanquishing evil With heavenly grace, say them with me now I love you And did I mention... God does too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2011 6:11:00 AM
Wow, I have to fave this one Tim, hope you don't mind but I am going to recommend it on FB as well :)
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Tim B
Date: 7/11/2011 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Wilma. It is an honor to have you recommend my poetry, I am glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 7/9/2011 7:07:00 PM
nice thoughts to penn and enjoyed your alliterary vocabulary, Tim along with it.
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, was wondering if the alliteration would fit in nicely or not. Wasn't sure to label it free verse or not but since there wasn't a lot of alliteration I went that route. Thanks again for the kind words. -TimB

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