Give It a Try

Passion running through my veins
Trembling, waiting, reason is fading
So many questions yet answers so few
Dreams never die, feelings never lie
Blessings flowing like a stream
Seasons ought to change but who?
  
Emotions trapped in my soul
   The desert needs rain
   The breathless needs air
   A flower needs sunshine
   So do we need God to form the first
chapter of our life's story
    
     Forever is not just a word but a city
        where we will be with Him ,the most high
       Do we need a bright star to lead our way?
            Or a burning sun to open the gate?
            Hell no! but struggle,
              because we have many to tackle

Our success is at the crest of the highest mountain
It takes the bravest to walk in the early morning's
dew to take what is due him.
 remember tears like ocean blue, 
will roll down the cheek of a lazy man.
 Just give everything a try
 you might help more than you know.
                      .....STRANJA.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/6/2018 8:16:00 AM
You write very well Gerold, this flows very well and you have a good command of English..
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Boss.
Date: 1/29/2018 4:06:00 PM
Nice write my friend. Guess all we can do is just continue trying not to be too human.
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Date: 5/13/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Lunita
Date: 1/27/2018 9:20:00 AM
Gerold, well done, i enjoyed the imagery. LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2020 2:46:00 AM
Thanks Linda
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