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- Give and Take -

Light
      we need
      in our hearts
      Soft, brilliant glow
      Give

      Hold
      my hand
      Our journey
      the course is set
      Take








03/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Light up the Page Poetry Contest : Lanterne
Sponsored by: Joseph May
2nd place in the contest

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/20/2019 9:57:00 AM Congratulations on your win; this one was definitely "over the top". Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2019 12:55:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/10/2019 10:17:00 PM A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Sunshine - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2019 6:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/10/2019 8:34:00 PM Congratulations, Sunshine. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2019 6:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2019 6:29:00 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2019 6:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/9/2019 11:10:00 AM Awesome, congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2019 11:57:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/8/2019 9:13:00 PM Be the light and be giving a wonderful message Anne Lise. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2019 8:42:00 AM - Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/4/2019 12:44:00 PM It's uplifting to think that when we give "light" to others, it is returned to us. Lovely lanterne, Sunshine. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 1:24:00 PM - Be a light in our dark world ... it makes everyone happy, dear Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/4/2019 11:07:00 AM so taken by this giving verse, anne... much enjoyed!... happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 11:15:00 AM - Many thanks, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/4/2019 5:34:00 AM Brilliant Lantern of give and take: You give more dearest, Anne-Lise than you take! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 7:10:00 AM - I greatly appreciate your visit and lovely comment, many thanks my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Martin Brown Date: 3/4/2019 4:41:00 AM First of all, I would like to thank you for regularly visiting my work, I appreciate it. The form of a Lanterne is simple, yet it is extraordinarily difficult, as the few words written have to be precise, not to exceed the syllables. You did quite well in achieving this not only in composition but also the subject, especially the opposite words. I apologise for not visiting frequently. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 5:17:00 AM - Nice to see you Martin, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/4/2019 1:11:00 AM Oh wow, so beautiful anne lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 1:14:00 AM - Hugs and thank you very much, Arthur :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Bette Bavington Date: 3/3/2019 3:34:00 PM The light in our hearts that shines from within let's us see that a hand which is a simple thing is all we need. Good one. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2019 12:28:00 AM - Hi Bette - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/3/2019 1:56:00 PM Never heard of this form, thought it was a light. Trying to get my head around it. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2019 2:01:00 PM - Looks simple ... but, this didn't come out in one second :))) - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 3/3/2019 1:24:00 PM Lovely Anne-Lise. The picture fits perfectly. Love it. A big sigh from me. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2019 1:43:00 PM - It is the little things that give life value :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/3/2019 1:16:00 PM Its what life and relationships are all about Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 PM - What is the meaning of life if we are not able to share ... :) - hugs and thank you very much, Jan :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 3/3/2019 1:07:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, This is entry for the contest theme. Great content as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2019 1:13:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely wishes and visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 12:24:00 PM That is what life is all about..sweet sentiments! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2019 12:41:00 PM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)