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- Give and Take -

Light
      we need
      in our hearts
      Soft, brilliant glow
      Give

      Hold
      my hand
      Our journey
      the course is set
      Take








03/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Light up the Page Poetry Contest : Lanterne
Sponsored by: Joseph May
2nd place in the contest

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Caren Krutsinger

March 20, 2019 at 9:57 AM

Congratulations on your win; this one was definitely "over the top".

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2019 at 12:55 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden

March 10, 2019 at 10:17 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Sunshine - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 11, 2019 at 6:16 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

March 10, 2019 at 8:34 PM

Congratulations, Sunshine. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 11, 2019 at 6:16 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 10, 2019 at 6:29 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 11, 2019 at 6:15 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

March 9, 2019 at 11:10 AM

Awesome, congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2019 at 11:57 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

March 8, 2019 at 9:13 PM

Be the light and be giving a wonderful message Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2019 at 8:42 AM

- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2019 at 12:44 PM

It's uplifting to think that when we give "light" to others, it is returned to us. Lovely lanterne, Sunshine. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 1:24 PM

- Be a light in our dark world ... it makes everyone happy, dear Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

March 4, 2019 at 11:07 AM

so taken by this giving verse, anne... much enjoyed!... happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 11:15 AM

- Many thanks, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 4, 2019 at 5:34 AM

Brilliant Lantern of give and take: You give more dearest, Anne-Lise than you take! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 7:10 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and lovely comment, many thanks my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Martin Brown

March 4, 2019 at 4:41 AM

First of all, I would like to thank you for regularly visiting my work, I appreciate it. The form of a Lanterne is simple, yet it is extraordinarily difficult, as the few words written have to be precise, not to exceed the syllables. You did quite well in achieving this not only in composition but also the subject, especially the opposite words. I apologise for not visiting frequently.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 5:17 AM

- Nice to see you Martin, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

March 4, 2019 at 1:11 AM

Oh wow, so beautiful anne lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 1:14 AM

- Hugs and thank you very much, Arthur :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Bette Bavington

March 3, 2019 at 3:34 PM

The light in our hearts that shines from within let's us see that a hand which is a simple thing is all we need. Good one. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2019 at 12:28 AM

- Hi Bette - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

March 3, 2019 at 1:56 PM

Never heard of this form, thought it was a light. Trying to get my head around it. Good luck. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 2:01 PM

- Looks simple ... but, this didn't come out in one second :))) - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

March 3, 2019 at 1:24 PM

Lovely Anne-Lise. The picture fits perfectly. Love it. A big sigh from me. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 1:43 PM

- It is the little things that give life value :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 3, 2019 at 1:16 PM

Its what life and relationships are all about Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 1:36 PM

- What is the meaning of life if we are not able to share ... :) - hugs and thank you very much, Jan :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

March 3, 2019 at 1:07 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, This is entry for the contest theme. Great content as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 1:13 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely wishes and visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

March 3, 2019 at 12:24 PM

That is what life is all about..sweet sentiments!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 12:41 PM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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