Girls,Girls

Girls love can be bitter,love can be sweet,
Take this warning,don't hurry to fall in love 
with every man that you meet,
Don't let the first hello or pretty smile,sweep 
you off your feet,
Take time and get to know the man that you meet,
You didn't take warning,instead,
The first date,a kiss on your forehead,
The second,a kiss on your cheek,
On the third date,tongue pass teeth,
Three days after you meet,you are under the sheet,
Madly in love and it's not even a week,
Then here comes bitter,out goes sweet,
You start seeing him less,your life feels incomplete,
You check out his file and finds out he has two 
girls on the block and a big woman down the street,
You talk to him about it, he threatens to knock out 
your teeth,
Your loving relationship,only lasted three weeks,
It could have been avoided,more bitter than sweet....


dedicated to my 2 daughters Roxxanna 24,and Shanique 18,
daddy loves you.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/26/2014 7:01:00 PM
A good piece of advice Richards..Have a good day!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2014 6:16:00 AM
thank you Saba,same to you
Date: 5/7/2014 3:28:00 PM
You look to young to have such old children. This is an entertaining poem to describe the dark sid of relationships.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2014 6:16:00 AM
thanks Richard,started young lol
Date: 12/21/2012 9:38:00 PM
Richard, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/22/2012 2:22:00 PM
same to you in the festive season PD,THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Date: 12/9/2012 12:38:00 AM
this one is nice... SOME girls are like that.. Girls be sure to love before you fall ok?! :)))
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/9/2012 5:05:00 AM
lol,thanks Shirlyn
Date: 10/14/2012 3:57:00 PM
You was trying to be negative, lol, but it is ok, nice poem
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/14/2012 5:12:00 PM
no protective,happy you liked,thanks Tarsha
Date: 10/6/2012 7:41:00 AM
Oh Wow Richard....hmmmm good advice. So much deception in this world and people who treat love with such disrespect. Great poem. Hope you daughters appreciated your kind advice :D - Shaz
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/6/2012 10:16:00 AM
they do,lol,thanks Shaz
Date: 10/1/2012 11:42:00 AM
Hi Richard, loved the poem, I doubt your daughters are going to listen when there are kisses involved, lol. Nicely written.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/2/2012 11:37:00 AM
lol thanks much Sheri
Date: 9/30/2012 1:00:00 AM
aww... liked ur lines
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/30/2012 6:07:00 AM
thanks Apoorva
Date: 9/27/2012 5:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/27/2012 3:46:00 PM
nice,thank you Vesna
Date: 9/25/2012 3:17:00 PM
Great advice and write Richard! Your girls are lucky to have a daddy like you. Hugs
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/25/2012 3:22:00 PM
they think so too,lol,thanks much Cecillia
Date: 9/5/2012 9:35:00 PM
very good poetry. I always enjoy reading your stuff. Cindy
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/7/2012 6:57:00 PM
thank you Cindy,keep reading
Date: 9/1/2012 8:47:00 PM
I really like this, sooo true
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Bree Lee
Date: 9/3/2012 12:09:00 PM
Check out my poem Dear Girl, Just posted it :) thanks
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/2/2012 12:21:00 AM
thank you Kelsey
Date: 9/1/2012 5:36:00 AM
Wish i had read this when i was younger, Richard, i've only twin granddaugthers, I enjoyed this lesson, thank you.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/1/2012 5:16:00 PM
you are welcome Harry,thanks
Date: 8/29/2012 9:44:00 AM
Richard; I like this. coming from a man - I hope they listen. Some people confuse love with sex. True love goes deeper than that. you don't look that old to have daughters that age. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM
they do,thanks Lucilla,in my 40s
Date: 8/28/2012 9:27:00 PM
I love this poem, Richard. and with not that much experience (im still young) lol i will keep this in mind. thank you for posting it. -Halie lol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/29/2012 9:20:00 AM
hope you do saves a lot of stress,lol thanks Halie
Date: 8/26/2012 10:52:00 PM
A funny one! and thank heavens not the reality I grew up with!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/27/2012 10:49:00 AM
hahaha you are the lucky one,thanks Andrea
Date: 8/24/2012 11:53:00 PM
Awesome. Thanks for sharing - Landor
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/25/2012 12:39:00 PM
thanks Landor
Date: 8/18/2012 12:49:00 AM
A not too subtle word of warning to the girls Rich...hope they realize, as I did not, that daddy knows best in these matters!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/23/2012 4:27:00 PM
sorry I took so long to post,proberly I would have saved you,lol,thanks Joy
Date: 8/16/2012 7:36:00 PM
WoW! Deep one Richard! The truth is inevitable. As a parent of a daughter and a daughter myself, all I can say is...hopefully they pay attention to these words! Loved this!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/17/2012 6:19:00 AM
thanks much Doreen,hope they do
Date: 8/16/2012 2:34:00 PM
you can talk all you want to.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/16/2012 2:37:00 PM
hahaha I just did,Situation
Date: 8/15/2012 8:05:00 PM
very good advice to give my own daughter
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/15/2012 9:50:00 PM
hope she takes heed,thanks Karen
Date: 8/15/2012 6:06:00 PM
nicely penned.. I loved your poem :) cory
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/16/2012 1:56:00 PM
thanks Cory
Date: 8/14/2012 9:50:00 PM
Aww, ur daughters all grown ups. A very great message. :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/15/2012 9:52:00 PM
thanks Dinda
Date: 8/14/2012 8:16:00 PM
Paternal & passionate Richard - There is the illusion of love, and then the real essence; your daughters are lucky to share your heart - J.A.B.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/15/2012 9:48:00 PM
thanks much Justin,they are
Date: 8/14/2012 12:27:00 PM
Richard I like this advice to girls, you don't look old enough to have kids of that age....David
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/14/2012 1:42:00 PM
I am in my mid 40s don't let my youthful looks fool you,lol lol,thanks David
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