Ghairo Daniels Poet Monorhyme

Girls Night Out

 

Free from cooking dinner and bathing kids
       we've exchanged lipstick, off to jazzy jigs                                    tried different costumes, with plaited wigs
         
   let's wear false lashes attached to blue lids
we'll go for raw oysters, no-one forbids
  then hurry to club where cool drummer skids
          
 girls will sing in deep voices startling digs
       nonchalant will we be, dismantling grids    
Black Magic Women, nobody's spare ribs !

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Paige Hind December 13, 2025 at 6:23 PM Hey so fun and cool!!! :) <3

Victor Buhagiar December 12, 2025 at 2:05 AM This is a great fun poem. Great descriptions. Glad I found you. Ghairo Daniels December 12, 2025 at 2:27 AM ThkU 4 visit, Victor. I’m only starting to write fun poems which means I’m progressing. Lol. Blessings, Poet.

Daniel Henry Rodgers December 11, 2025 at 9:21 AM Dear Ghairo, pure, unadulterated liberation and fun! What really comes through is the powerful confidence and collective strength of the group, ready to shed expectations and just own the space. That line about being "nobody's spare ribs" is a killer statement! :) Autumn Blessings, Dear Ghairo, Daniel

Jenish Somadas December 10, 2025 at 10:15 PM It beautifully captures the liberation of stepping out.. Good one Ghairo..

Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2025 at 6:40 PM Sounds like a fun night out!