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Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

There was a naughty girl, and the naughty girl was she She worked a crossword puzzle, while she had her morning tea A second cup, ......she should get up... for chores and roll her sleeves! Much work to do, but something new for fun was in the breeze ! Ambition flew, intentions few, were not a thing to please! Instead of sponges, mops and brooms, she danced about the room Sudsy dish pans heaping full...the laundry yet to do......... Instead she called a friend or two, and took in a movie too! Her bed unmade, her bills unpaid, some folks might call her lazy She sat in shade, had lemonade, and then she picked a daisy Beneath a sunny sky ......she heard the lullaby of the birds that sing on high She had a meal to cook but would rather look at the snowtop hills nearby So much work undone, and the dinner?......NONE! But she fed her soul instead! __________________________________________________________ For Contest: Triple Threat sponsored by Casarah Nance

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Date: 7/7/2015 1:03:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your Triple Threat win. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:38:00 PM
Congrats.... SK
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:07:00 PM
oh carrie, this is awesome. It reminds me of that time Sara had us do a list poem and I named off all the things I did one day instead of my chores. YEP, a well deserved win. Congrats.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:04:00 PM
Great fun write Carrie congrats on your win
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:30:00 AM
I loved this, so much work undone and the dinner none..but she fed her soul instead...wow, I feel that, it made me smile, thank you so much for your entry this was great :)
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Date: 4/10/2014 11:32:00 AM
Tremendous... You must know me or we're at least kindred spirits...
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:32:00 AM
Great poem full go fun! Loved to read n reminds of what everybody often comes across ! Congrats on fine win Carrie !
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:07:00 AM
Congrats Carrie! I so enjoyed this fun poem. Don't we all feel like doing something similar at times:) // paul
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Date: 4/9/2014 7:35:00 AM
creative write and theme... for a lazy woman.. who has the right to order pizza for dinner.. lol... this is so great, ?Carrie!!! I enjoyed it a lot! ..>Congratulations on your win.. :")))
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Date: 4/9/2014 6:21:00 AM
If one has two loaves of bread, one should sell one and buy violets to feed the soul instead..Written by a monk can't remember his name..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed your creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2014 2:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Carrie. smiles and hugs Verlena
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:26:00 AM
Is it you, Carrie. It sure sounds like ME!! Love this.
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Date: 4/7/2014 7:57:00 PM
I like that. Makes me want to abandon my housework and feel whimsical! very good.
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