Girls In Love

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Her dampened auburn hair, flowing perfectly atop the pillow...

Gazing into her pure emerald eyes; slowly kissing, her pink parting lips

The warmth of her ivory breast, caressing my own; so very soft

Smiling as lowering her silkened fingers, to touch my perfumed heart

Gently closing my loving eyes; tingling, in crystals wedding bells...

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..."Girls In Love" *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cooper Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 6:57 PM
lovely gift to someone you must adore!
Fiery Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 9:08 AM
WHAT A SENSATIONAL WORK IT IS ROMANTIC DREAM AND SO MUCH IN LOVE HERE SERAH...A DREAM LIKE QUALITY U HAVE IN UR POETRY...i AM ENTHRALLED NOW
Agtani Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 1:26 AM
My dear Sarah, Sensual stuffs! How can you handle a two thousand and more poets who adore your poems my dear Sarah? Would you ever sleep?? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your poem tonight. May the holiday season warm your heart and your love ones! Dalila
Duncan Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Oh" I like this, very nice,, you have a fantastical day ;} thanks for dropping by my Twisted love !
Ball Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:40 AM
A very beautiful write my friend. Wonderful expression with much feeling and really good imagery. God Bless, JB
Austin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:33 AM
So sensitive - slow finger tips, and as a friend of mine put it - "galvanized." Love, daver
Butterfly Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:58 AM
This is so beautiful Sarah and filled with love.
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December 26, 2011 at 3:54 PM
* "NO MY BEAUTIFUL BABY * BUT YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV * FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Penfreak Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 10:42 PM
OooooOO.... Lovele <3 .... i lived this poem..!!
Wesley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Auburn hair and green eyes could be the epitome of feminine beauty. Your descriptions are so vivid and lovely Sarah!
Minardi Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Sensual yet elegant. I enjoyed this so much, Sarah.
Singe Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 8:21 AM
that is so beautiful..im happy that you can be so complete and show everybody.
Green Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 9:24 PM
so impressive is your writing of passion,,,and desire,,,draws me into a trance of love,,,and sends my mind wandering into a romantic state.....................
Puddifoot Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 4:18 PM
beautiful, sensual verse, enjoyed reading :-) and thanks for all your lovely, inspiring comments on my work...
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 3:47 PM
Sensual piece, my friend. Beautiful
Jane Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 3:58 AM
Beautiful and delectable as always xx
Fitzgerald Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Reading this was like being given a gift and gave my mind the freedom to think of my own love , Thank you Sarah , luv Declan
A   Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 10:44 PM
wow! girls in love.. what a take! I love the perfumed heart thought... you write very lovely... fresh right out of the shower...... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
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May 5, 2012 at 6:23 PM
...."Yessss, 'My Sweeet Baby.'" *
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December 30, 2011 at 3:34 PM
* "TO LATHER YOUR BREAST WITH CREAM * THEIR WARMTH & BEAUTY * AMID MY JOYFUL PALMS * BATHING THEM WITH MY TONGUE * DRYING THEM WITH MY LOVE * YESSSS * KNEELING AFORE YOUR THRONE * YOUR TENDER HEART * YOUR SIGHS * MY DREAMS * THE SCENT, INSIDE YOUR LOVE * TURN THE LIGHTS OUT * MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED." *
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December 29, 2011 at 4:34 PM
* "HI BABY * I LUV YOU." *
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December 25, 2011 at 3:34 PM
* "YESSSS * RIGHT OUT OF THE SHOWER * SOOO VERY BEAUTIFUL * THESE THOUGHTS OF YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV * FOREVER * 'YOURS!'" *
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Enjoyed you poen Sarah ! My english i not so good,but I do my best. Thank you for allways warm comment on my poem.You warm my heart! Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
Kearley Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:39 PM
My...my. Your words flow as perfectly as her hair atop the pillow...Very nice :o)
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..Very passionate work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Ambrosia is so easy to make and so healthy for one...I am glad that you enjoy it to eat..Sara
Mclaughlin Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Lovely Sarah x thank you for passing by with such beauty comments x :) Dawn
Mclaughlin Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Ps..thank you again :) Dawnie
Onclaud Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 10:48 AM
a very intruiging yet beautifully scribed write, sarah... your images float with subtle sensuality and great tonal value.. great work..:) huggs!
Barricklow Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 2:00 AM
love it =^_^= its beautiful
Seraphin Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 2:15 AM
MY GIRLS * ITS GONNA BE SOOO SWEEET * You must really like country music huh ??
. Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:24 PM
can't wait to see how this goes, it already started beautifully. Thanks for stopping by Sarah. Hope you have a lovely day ^.^
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 8:07 PM
click on, then ~N
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