Girls, Flowers, and Rivers

Every girl is like a flower
Rose, cherry, cosmos, tulip etc.
either domestic or wild…..

Every girl is like a rose
Black, white, or pink
Everyone has her own fragrance
 and beauty…..

Every flower is like a girl
they dance with the gentle breeze
they smile with a great joy….

Every rose is like a girl
They bloom for others
For the well being of humanity……

In this world rivers are like girls
Girls also murmur like rivers……
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thajudeen Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations dear poet Abedin on your achievement.Well composed like a garland Your poem.
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Nicely done poem, congrats on the win
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Mohammad.
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan x
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Mohammad, tvery sweet poem, not sure what kind of pie poem this is. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 11:00 AM
wonderful imagery Mohammed I loved your portrayal of girls as beautiful blooms - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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November 30, 2014 at 1:05 AM
MOHAMMAD, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~
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